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A Perfect Combination Chapter 54

Script By: 2011Paramedic

So Far in Chapter 53, Carla and Margo both received a visit from a cute doctor Jeremy at a local San Deigo nightclub, and now we will go back to Nashua, N.H. and to Chapter 54 of that scripted story where Patty has a surprise for Fay of all fun things and planing to have one as well, so here it is! and of course a few trumpets playing fast in unison in that musical score too!

Submitted:Jan 14, 2013    Reads: 34    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   

Fade In: (North Nashua, N.H. "Rosie's," Friday, 7:27 Pm!)

(Mexican horns playing very fast in unison during the instrumental song "Spanish Flea" from "The Dating Game")

Patty: "Okay, Fay look what i have here in this bag!"

Fay: "Ooh, let it on me Patty!"

Patty: "Well i got you a nice Red sleeveless evening gown with no straps or nothing only strapless and satin too!"

Fay: "Oh, Patty it's beautiful, i love it!!"

(Fay smiles very happily and crying happily with pure joy and happiness too)

Patty: "Yeah, and yummy too!"

Fay: "Thank you, it's very beautiful!"

Patty: "Yeah, you're welcome and i also have another color of your long sleeved ribbed knitted turtleneck sweater but in colored White and as well as a CD of the greatest hits of The Captain and Tennille too!"

Fay: "The one that Toni sings Love Will Keep Us Together, right?"

Patty: That's right!"

Fay: "Ooh, thank you! and Love will keep us together is my favorite song of all time and so does Eddie too!"

(Fay and Patty hugged each other again before heading out of the restaurant's bathroom to see Austin and Eddie)

Fay: "Oh, and before we leave to join our boyfriends for dinner,when me and Eddie have sex tonight with each other and when you and Austin do have sex with each other later tonight or tomorrow night, i want you to give him something for me!!"

Patty: "Okay sure, name it!"

(Fay then lights a match and gives Patty that soft whispering message)

Fay: (whispering softly) "me and Eddie will be in love for a very long time. okay?"

(Fay then blows out the match)

Patty: (takes a breath and then happily said) "Deal!"

Fay: (whispering) beautiful!

to be continued


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