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A Perfect Combination Chapter 57

Script By: 2011Paramedic

So far in Chapter 56 of that scripted story, Julie, Mike, and the gang all noticed that Fay and Eddie are truly a very cute couple and everything! and now we're up to Chapter 57 and back to Nashua, N.H. where Susan and Ryan were just about to go out only for a bite to eat somewhere for dinner then go see a movie in theatres and such things when they both get a surprise visit by the one and only four woman singing group, "Great Expectations!" so here it is, enjoy!

Submitted:Jan 15, 2013    Reads: 27    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

Fade In: (North Nashua, N.H. Michelle's rooming house, Friday,7:32 PM!)

(As Susan was all dressed up in her Yellow long sleeved ribbed knitted turtleneck sweater and blue jeans getting ready to go out with Ryan to dinner and a movie somewhere)

Ryan: "Susan, are you already to go?"

Susan: "Yes i sure am, i'll be down in a sec, Ryan!!"

(Susan finally went downstairs to see Ryan as they left the rooming house for a night out on the town somewhere)

Ryan: "You look, gorgeous!"

Susan: "Thank you, i feel beautiful!"

Ryan: "I Bet!"

(Susan giggles as she and Ryan kissed each other a couple of times and then went out somewhere)

(Ryan was wearing a long sleeved Orange pullover shirt and beige jacket as well as they got into her car which was a 2010 Light brown ford focus and drove off)

(No sooner as they make their way out of the rooming house, they were briefly stopped by the arrival of the female singing group, "Great Expectations!!" just to see and meet with them in person..)

Susan: "Ryan, sweetie look! it's Great Expectations!"

Ryan: "They are really sure here to see us, too as well!"

Susan: "Yeah!"

Jaime "Suzie, hi there!"

Susan: "Hi there, Jaime!"

Jaime: "Well you must be Ryan Longwood, right?"

Ryan: "Yes i am, Ryan Longwood!"

(The three other remaining women Cindy, Lainie, and Melody all said hello in person)

(Cindy, Melody, and Lainie)

"Hi, Ryan honey! will you step out of your car right now please?!"

to be continued


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