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A Perfect Combination Chapter 58

Script By: 2011Paramedic

Previously in Chapter 57 of that scripted story, Susan and Ryan both get a surprise visit by Jaime, Melody, Lainie, and Cindy, the vocal quartet from their hometown of Manchester New Hampshire,, "Great Expectations!!"

and now we will move up to Chapter 58 and still in Nashua, N.H. where Terri continues to demand Eddie and Fay where Susan is? but thankfully her sister Patty is there to put an end to this terrible ordeal and fast, so here it is!!

Submitted:Jan 15, 2013    Reads: 37    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   

Fade In: (North Nashua, N.H. "Rosie's," Friday, 7:34 PM!)

Patty: Terri, shut up why don't you leave my friends and Suzie alone she does not want to see or talk to you when you're like that!"

Terri: "You stay out of this, Patty! this is between only Susan and me cuz she ruined my life with that loser boyfriend of his!!"

Patty: "No, Terri you are! you're the loser here, not me, or Eddie and Fay or Susan or Ryan either!!"

Fay: "Patty, please stop it just stop what you're doing okay?"

Terri: "You're a fiesty ungrateful character, right?"

Patty: No, i'm Susan's sister."

Terri: "You know, you're the one who needs to be taught a good lesson here."

Patty: "I don't fight with you on this, Terri!"

Terri: "Tough luck, bitch!"

(Terri shoves Patty angrily on the floor hard as she fell down)

Fay: "Patty!"

(Patty quickly gets up and quickly got a plate of spaghetti and meatballs to angrily tossed and throw it in her face!)

Terri: "I'm gonna kill you, you sisterly bitch!"

(Patty ran across the restaurant getting some more stuffs to throw them at Terri)

to be continued


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