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A Perfect Combination Chapter 1

Novel By: 2011Paramedic

And now my brand new 64 parts of a very cute story novel for my story about a beautiful and lovely young copy editor named Susan Watkins goes out and have a beautiful lunch with her on and off again cool and handsome lawyer/boyfriend Ryan Longwood and talk about their upcoming beautiful future together and everything so here it goes!!!!

Submitted:Feb 1, 2012    Reads: 123    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

Fade In

(Intro to the city of Pittsburgh Pennsylvania in the daytime)

Cute beauty shot: as Susan was wearing her lovely long sleeved Red ribbed knitted turtleneck sweater and her yellow skirt underneath marches on down to have lunch with her on and off again boyfriend and lawyer Ryan Longwood just for some time together and everything!!


(Exclaims happily)

"Hi, Sweetie!"

Ryan: (smiling back happily)

"Well hello there, darling!"

as Ryan and Susan gave each other a quick hello kiss

Ryan: "How's your day going so far?"

Susan: "oh i don't know, slightly hectic but just beautiful that's all!"

Ryan: "Glad to hear that, Sweetheart!"

Susan: (Smiles happily at Ryan)

"Yeah, Sweetie me too!"

Susan: "Oh, honey this place is so beautiful! i love having lunch here!"

Ryan: "Yeah it sure is, it's nice out here!"

Susan: (Chuckles very happily at her boyfriend)

Intro to Susan's best friend and co-worker Janet Wilcox coming over to see the two lovebirds in person

Janet: Susan, is that you?

(Susan turns around to see Janet had arrived to see Susan at that outdoor eatery place)

Janet: "Hi there!"

Susan: "Hi there, Janet!"

as she and Janet hugged each other for a few seconds and then seated at the table to have their lunch time together

Susan: "Janet, this is my boyfriend and lawyer Ryan Longwood, we're great together Ryan and me!!"

Janet: "Wow, he's gorgeous!"

Susan: "Yes, don't i know it!"

And then Susan turned her attention back to her boyfriend Ryan for a special surprise before they have their lunch together and everything and before returning back to work as well

Susan: "Okay, sweetie pie close your eyes for me!"

Ryan: "Honey, we need to eat before we head on back to work, can't you do all of that later tonight?"

Susan: "Yes i know and we will do it again tonight at your place too, but just close your eyes, please honey! it's a surprise!"

Ryan: "What kind of a surprise is it?"

Susan: "You'll see, sweetie! just something beautiful that's all!!"

as Susan kisses Ryan twice on the forehead....

To be continued


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