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Breaking Forward Chapter 15

Short story By: 2011Paramedic

so far in chapter 14, Allison gets a ride from Shannay to work in her squad car, and now we're up to chapter 15 of that cute story where Patrick and his best friend Dale Bass were both working at the photo studio to catch up on some photo shooting and all sorts untill the two people spot another beautiful young woman with an astonishing Red sleeveless dress named Rachel Baines meets them in person who also has her eyes locked in on Dale as well and lots of mexican horn music playing fast in unison too, enjoy!

Submitted:Oct 28, 2013    Reads: 10    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   

Breaking Forward Chapter 15

By 2011Paramedic

(Mexican horns playing faster and faster in unison with another fast paced background music playing in the background)

(Mexican horns again playing very fast in unison)

"Pat, how's it hanging my man?" asked Dale.

"Oh, nothing much Dale, just working hard for the big bucks that's all!" Patrick replied.

"How's Ally?"

"She's doing good, she's over at work at the tv studio doing the morning weather report or something!"

"Beautiful girl, isn't she?"

"Yep, she sure is!"

A few seconds later, a gorgeous girl named Rachel Baines in a lovely Red sleeveless dress came by to see them both in person.

(Music to watch girls go by plays in the background as Rachel walks on by to see both Patrick and Dale in person)

(Mexican horns playing very fast in unison a couple of times as Rachel walks on over to see the two gorgeous handsome men in person)

"Hello there, tiger!" Rachel greeted Dale in a soft sultry sexy voice.

"Rachel, hi there!" Dale replied.

"Mmm, Mmm you have a very sexy body Dale, it's very beautiful!"

"It sure is, sweetheart!"

"Mmm Hmmm!"

Then Rachel had an idea that would cheer up Dale

"Listen, sweetie, do you want to go out and have dinner with me someplace just you and me?' asked Rachel.

"Dinner?" asked Dale.

"Yes, dinner!" Rachel offered.

"Sure, yes, i would like that!!" Dale exclaimed very happy.

"Okay, beautiful!" Rachel greeted Dale happily and then asked Dale "How about on Saturday night at "Ron Ron's" on Glendale lane?"

"Sure, like at 7:30 pm?"

"That would be great! and my brother Daniel is coming to see us too!"

"Well okay then, we'll go out on Saturday for a dinner date!"

"Yes! beautiful, i like that!!"

(Rachel happily shot Dale with a huge huge smile on her face very happily while wearing that lovely sleeveless Red dress and laughs very happily and hard too!)

Female Singers: (Doo Doo, Doo Doo!)

to be continued


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