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Breaking Forward Chapter 16

Short story By: 2011Paramedic

So far in chapter 15, Rachel invites Dale for a special dinner date for saturday night, and now we're up to chapter 16 of that cute story with another great music score with Fay and Eddie and their great adventures with the city of San Francisco, enjoy!

Submitted:Oct 30, 2013    Reads: 12    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

Breaking Forward Chapter 16

By 2011Paramedic

(Mexican horns continued playing fast in unison as the fast paced music score continues playing)

Fay and Eddie were strolling around San Francisco all morning long just having fun and having the best time of their lives as well

Fay: "Yeah, yeah! whoo!!"

(Fay laughing hard)

Fay and Eddie then both got on the trolley and took off so that they can a great big tour to the city by the bay area holding hands with each other and kissing each other as well

(Mexican horns again plays fast in unison)

(Electronic drums pounding angrily like thunder a few times during that great music score) a fun insrumental tune was called "A Very San Francisco Beautiful Morning"

(Horns playing)

(Orchestral music playing as well)

Fay and Eddie just giving each other a few passionate kisses as they continue their adventures of the San Francisco bay area.

"Oh, Eddie i love this beautiful city so much, because my sister Mandy lives here!!" Fay happily told Eddie.

"Yeah i know, and we'll see Mandy later this week too, sweetheart!!" Eddie responded.

"Oh, Eddie! i love you, i love you so much!" Fay excliamed very happily to Eddie.

"Me too, honey!" Eddie responded with a big grin.

"Beautiful, Yes!" Fay smiling hapily.

Then Fay and Eddie hugged each other and enjoying their vacation as well

Fay: "Whoo!"

(Fay again laughs very hard as our story continues and the fast music abruptly comes to a close as well)

(Electronic drums again pounding angrily like thunder a few times just to end that song)

(Music ends)

to be continued


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