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Pathethic Love Story: Lover Who Rest Forever

Short story By: Abid Loner

This sad and sorrow short story is about a guy who still single and met a new person in his life on a big cruise.However the joy ended with a pathetic incident.......

Submitted:May 14, 2013    Reads: 58    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

Pathethic Love Story: Lover Who Rest Forever

Its summer and I was just graduated from college .A very hot days until I could feel the heat diffused through my skin. I live alone because my parent had died in an excident 5 years ago .However, I had a great best friends .That summer, my friends invited me to went on a vacation with them .Our destination is The Carribean Island .Its surely a great idea . My friends bring along their girlfriend.Not for me.Im the only bachelor among us.

The ship was a really Grand Cruise and we are so excited. It has ten storey ,nine restaurant, eight casino , seven Jacuzzi , six hall , five arcade , four swimming pool , three gyms , two bowl arena , and a Great Captain.Its really a tremendous trip ever .The Captain said it will take 3 weeks to reached our destination.

That night, there was a party held at the hall . Everyone enjoyed it . All my friends have fun dancing with their mates. Im getting bored and lonely so decided to had some fresh air on the deck. It was a beautiful night. The stars shining brightly and the breeze blew smoothly through my skin. Then my sight unconciously focus into one direction. There was a lady in red dress standing alone at the end of the deck . Curiously , I approached that lady and try to had an conversation.

"HELENA" , that was her name . A name that I will remember forever . She's 27 and from Nevada . Her parent was died too . Helena was a manager in an film industry . She was an independence-type and live alone. Greatly , she's still single.For me , this was a great chance to had a lover.

Everynight ,I will went to the deck and spent time with Helena. Sometimes she act weirdly like to said something.However ,we had such a great time. I know that it was my first sight love but still afraid to admit.One night, I regaining all my courage and told her about my feelings. She kept silent for a while and suddenly start sobbing. She told me that we lived in a different world and not meant to be together.I was just speechless for a moment . Then im getting upset and told that it was all her excuses . That night , im hardly get to sleep thinking about what happen.

NEXT morning ,the whole cruise were shocked by a bad news. A dead body was found in a cabin by a deck cleaner . Its was HELENA!!. According to the Captain , Helena might be trapped inside the cabin and died a week before I met her . What a terrible fate to such a good lady .Im so regret for blaming her all night. Then , I know that all this time "she" was trying to tell me about that..

When the cruise arrived at destination , I buried her at the graveyard and prayed for her. Untill now , im still remember my precious time with "Helena". For me ,"Helena" was a Lover Who REST FOREVER..



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