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If the Moon should Break

Short story By: air

This is a Challenge by FunnyBunny. to write a story with the phrase; 'By the night, by the starlight, the twinkling of hearts would be our solemn vow' ^_^
yes isn't that a beautiful line she gave me?
so how come it took me so long to write it? lol, well my computer crashing, weather too nice to stay inside, and some of lifes chaos of course lol ^_^
Lien let me know if it's ok ok? I'm not sure if it canreally be titled a story sinse it's really more poetic like. if not I'll redo.
well ok, here goes it, hope you like ^_^

Submitted:Jul 10, 2008    Reads: 171    Comments: 8    Likes: 12   

As two young star gazers made vows to each other

they could see thier selves on the other side of the moon,

as two elderly people still deeply in love,

for as they made thier vows,

time was naught~


"If the moon should break from our sentiments alone,

I would endeavor to catch every last moonbeam

that shattered exsistance as we knew it to be,

and start again"

cried the boy,

"The dusty night would go on shimmering

in the deepness of silent whispers in thyne ear."


"By the night, by the starlight, the twinkling

of hearts would be our solemn vow"


And not to be forgotten were the melting moments

into stars that had not yet shown,

as the young man said:


"Joy, was not the freedom I had,

but, the ever intermingling with you"


The two did not know the world had ended,

and yet thier love had not.


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