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This is a story pretty much told through notes between 3 differant people.
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Submitted: May 16, 2008    Reads: 232    Comments: 16    Likes: 5   


“Hey Dan can you pass this note to Alexei?” I heard Kendra asked the guy next to me, Dan.

“Yeah sure,” he grumbled.  He threw the note onto my slightly messy desk.  I looked over at Kendra and she gave me a goofy wave.  I rolled my eyes and started to open the note.

“Alexei Jameson put that note away now before I have to read it to the class,” My teacher Mr. Strikers scolded.

“Sorry,” I mumbled and I heard snickering coming from Dan’s direction.

“What do you think you’re laughing at?” I whisper scolded Dan.

“Your face,”

“What?”

“Your face,” he said, this time a little louder.

“I heard you the first time.  I just wanted to make sure you really wanted to get on my bad side,” I harshly whispered to him.

“I only meant that you looked at Mr. Strikers like he was Darth Vader from Star Wars or something,” I started to laugh.  I stopped as soon as I got a glare from Mr. Strikers.  When he wasn’t looking I took out the note.

 

Alexei,
La Di da.  Those are my favorite sounds of the day.  Yeah well anyways:
 
I think Dan likes you.  Look right now he’s staring at you.  Well at least when I’m writing you this note.  You better hope Mr. Strikes isn’t watching you read this wonderful note because then you’ll get detention and ruin your perfect record.
 
Luv ya lots,
KENDRARW

 

I snickered but I thought of the first line, ‘I think Dan likes you’.  I looked over at Dan and sure enough he was looking at me.  He quickly turned away.  His black shaggy hair rustled when he moved.  I sighed.  I had a crush on Dan for about a year, ever since he had moved to the area.  I looked over to him.  He was scribbling something down on a piece of scratch paper.  He threw is onto my desk.

It read:

 

Alexei:
 
I have to spit this, or in this case write it out.
I really like you.  You the most kind, sensible, caring, and thoughtful person I know.
I don’t really care if you don’t like me back but if you don’t please do not send a note back to me saying you don’t.
 
Smiles,
Dan.

 

The emotions I felt were overwhelming.  I quickly scribbled onto the paper:

 

Dan,
I’ve liked you since the day I met you.
I really like you to.
In fact I can’t believe I’m writing this but,
I love you.
 
Hugs,
Alexei


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Comments:

really cute, I like the way it was formatted, the notes were perfect. Well done my belle:)

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Danka
=]

Aww, that was really cute^.^

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks
=]

This was awesome. What made you come up with the idea of writing it in notes?

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha...
well its kind of a long story
in math class me and a few of my friends were passing notes and we got yelled at by my teacher Mr. Kraft.
I just thought it would be a funny topic to write on
=]
-Ally

I like it:) Too bad it can't always be like that.

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

haha,
yeahh
=]

awee thats so cute.

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha
Thanks
=]

Cute but very fast.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks
and it was kinda fast
i guess

Very cute and classy. Wish it was longer though...love it.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks
and my next few short stories ill try and make longer
and who knows maybe ill make a second one to this story
:]

Cute. I agree with whiteheart, I wish it was longer but I still love it.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
thankss
:]

BOB
(not registered user)

that was a really great story!! Congrats!!

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks
:]

awwww so cute ^^- a guy actually had enough guts to tell the girl that he liked her

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
yep he did
and thanks for liking it
:]

...
AWE!! That was so cute. ^-^
I lovered it. And for once! A guy that actually tells the girl he likes her. Dangnabbit. Why can't they all be like that. HAHA

~!~Megan~!~

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

haha
thanks for lovereding it!
:]
and I know
i wish all guys could be like that in real life
:]

AWW.Is very cute.But guys aren't like that in real lives.I like this guy since september.Sometimes I catch him looking at me or smiling but I don't think he would write me a note saying if he likes me or not.I like this.

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks
and yeahh
I know guys can be like this
its kinda sad in a way
:[ but thanks again for liking it
:]

hi! ally. wow. what an unusual love letters and that too in a classroom. but that's the beauty of it. hope v all r this lucky. heart-warming. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!
:]

that was so cute1 i loved it!

=)

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks
:]

AaAWwW
This is just so cute
The whole note thing is awesome
Nice work, just love this
except i love a lot of things you do
AWESOMENESS
XoXoXo
Dom XD!!!!

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha!!!
THX!

pleez write more

Posted: Oct 21, 2008

Author Comment:

umm...
i'll write more short stories
but no continuation of this



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