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Intensely Falling

Short story By: Ikky2000

A twist on the beautiful Cinderella fairy tale.

Submitted:Feb 21, 2014    Reads: 170    Comments: 42    Likes: 15   

Intensely Falling

In my oceanic beryl-blue orbs, he was perfect.

A lone soul like myself; forever hidden deep in the depths of this fearful world -he was a widower.

It was love at first sight; I knew I had fallen intensely and madly in love -for me that was such a stunning and shocking moment because never before had I felt this way for any man.

That moment in time, he glanced at me innocently; his rich dark curls falling into those swoonful thundery-grey eyes, his gaze bore holes into my glowing skin, making me blush ever so feathery under his scrutiny.

Since that very eventful day, my lover and I got to know each other- we talked, kissed and had the time of our life; I know for a fact that I will never forget the day we met because something very magnificent happened then: I had intensely fallen for him.


*Author Note: This is my entry in dclovesfd's five sentence contest season two <3 I have to say, it's damn hard writing only 5 sentences :O But I think I've done it...let me know what you guys think <3 and thank you so much for reading! ^.^


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