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Forbidden love Part 1(AngelicAttitude challenge)

Short story By: Jelica

Tags: Fairytale, Love

Fairy Leonora 18 years of age wonders off the fairy kingdom to see the world of mortals. Here she meets a 19 year old young man named Edward. And decides to stay.

Submitted:Jul 8, 2009    Reads: 172    Comments: 12    Likes: 7   

No one can stop me from loving you

"For the love of your father, dear, Leonora do not pass that bounder," said very old fairy, blocking the pathway to a world of danger where no beautiful creature from their people can survive. "If you do so, you won't be able to fly. You would be like humans!

She had been trying to persuade another fairy, a lot younger, and more beautiful then life itself. On her back grew subtle azure wings hovering in air, gold lock fall casually down over dress like solid ice. Young fairy looked as a stuff of dreams, like something that in the world of mortals can not excites. This beauty was never meant to be seen by any mortal eyes, and as much as the fairy had been thrilled, the old one developed terror from this day.

"Grandmother, don't be childish, nothing would ever occur to me," said the fairy smiling harmoniously. "I just wish for to see the world further than my own. What is immoral with that? More to the point I have not got time to quarrel. I will return.

Leonora convey a smile, with which many fairy princes find charming beyond words both mortals and immortals. Her grandma felt her will remissive under power of her granddaughter's clean innocent smile. In less then a half minute later, Jessica had won the battle. Defeated old fairies pinch her hands up admitting defeat, moving out-of-the-way to let her through.


In the meantime, Edward who just left turned 19 wondered about the woods away from his family farm. In his hand he held a bucket that must be filled with chestnut. With time he drew deeper into greenness of the nature that seemed so alive. Its smell he inhaled overcomes him. In order to enjoy more of this sweet nature he did the job quickly than he wanted at first and had lay down under an oak tree to catch a moment of sleep. He woke up two hours later, although it seemed that he spent longer in the realm of dreams, if not all eternity because he got awaken by a strange, but beautiful voice. Standing up he rubbed his eyes.

Voice was soft, melodic, sounded as lira. It ringed into his ears almost like no symphony he had ever hear. Each spoken word took his breath away, making him to hurry to the source of such purity.

With rapid steps Edward approached the place. Under what impression he was best says the fact he did not noticed as distance between him and the owner are melting.

He broke out of trees, on the shore of deep lake with a surface like a mirror that took scene of sky above. Here surprise of his life awaited him.

Beautiful lady washed her face hidden by gold locks.

"Excuse mi miss. Are you alright?" Edward said considerate.

"I am well, thanks for your question.

"Do you need help?" Edward enquired.

"Truth to be told I do. Can you tell me where am I currently.

He looked her plain.

"Madam Do you experience loss of memory?

"Who? Me? No.

Leonora glanced at the young man in front, and felt how his appearance is influencing her. She examined his large brown eyes like two bronze coins, and luxurious brown hair is shape of bale of hay. Her smooth cheeks gain blush. In that moment a voice in her mind which came from the heart spoke to her she must stay here.

"I'm not from around these parts," she lied nonchalantly. "I'm lost and have no parents.

"Do you have a name?

"I do. It's Leonora.

Now she hadn't had the least intent to preserve given word, and return back. Leonora stretched her tiny hand in Edward, got up and followed him to destination.

Smiling fondly he gently put his arm over her shoulder. She was going to Edwards home. His parents have hosted their new guest as best as they could. A room next to Edwards had been assigned to her, and Leonora a fairy spent entire night in the house walking stealthy looking thing as like TV, washing machine, etc. Although she had left her wings behind, still she could move with ease, as if sliding through air.

Next day she spend in Edward company, who referred views of full admiration putting clearly that her presence fills him with desire to press his lips on her.

"I've never met anyone like you," he admitted as they walked beside speedy brook where foam had been breaking onto the rock that picks from water. He pulled her beside himself, and Leonora put head on his shoulder.

"I've never known world could be so wonderful," she replied." Much better. Its weird how I used to think others species is bad, different from mine.

"Species?" said Edward confused.

Leonora bit her lip. She should not have said that.

"Forget what I've said. All that is important is this moment.

Then they kissed for long under trees. But Edward did not know the same kind of species is watching them from safe distance. Shocked by what it had seen it lifts up, panic-stricken to inform all they have a problem.

This is for AngelicAtitude Challenge. I'm better when writing novels are concerned for I can be very descriptive. This is a try to see if i'm any good at writing short story. I know this is not the perfect piece of writing, but if you like this tick that blue little box and comment.


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