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one last kiss, but the love will never end.

Short story By: lol

two young teenagers are in love and want to be apart of each others life for ever even though her boyfriend is leaving .... (true encounter)

Submitted:Dec 12, 2008    Reads: 152    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   

He looks her straight in the eyes.

Just one look and she melts inside. Strong arms wrap around her waist and slowly their lips meet. Arms around her waist, and arms around his neck. Both eyes closed. The kiss lasts long and sweet. Suddenly the heavens open and drenches the park grounds and both of them. They look up to the sky.

"Gods crying out of love for us," he says to her .

Again they kiss, longer and sweeter. Tighter and tighter they hold each other, not wanting to let go of one another.

"Your perfect the way you are. Please don't think there is anything wrong with you." He whispers on her lips.

"Dont change a thing." He says again.

"I wont, anything for you", she replies.

Just standing there, they hug. But long tears fall down her cheeks, the one person she ever loved deserted her when she was six and now something similar is happening again. But he promised. He promised he would come looking for her when he is due to come back . Everything will be fine in a years time. everything...

"I want to hug you for eternity, and keep you safe from anything that is dangerous. You will be forever engraved on my mind," he says letting go of her slowly ...

He reaches into his right jean pocket and clutches something in his hand.... he lifts up her right hand.

"When I come back ,I will put this on your left hand". He puts on a beautiful diamond ring on her right index finger. A smile spreads across her face.

" I will love you for eternity." He breaths.

"Eternity is too short , i will love you for the rest of my life , when im gone and after wards i will love you in spirit." She replies.

For the last time they hug and the rain automatically switches off like someone turned off a tap.

'Please dont forget about me." She chokes out before tears fall freely for the second time down her skin.

"Never. Never, ever, in a million years." he replies ....its time for him to go. He looks her in the eyes and he pecks her on her forehead. for the first time she sees him crying.

He turns around slowly and walks away leaving her behind bundled up in a ball ,sobbing on the ground .


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