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Son of a Caveman # 31 - Confusion

Short Story By: Marathongman
Romance


Another short Caveman chapter View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 14, 2009    Reads: 147    Comments: 9    Likes: 5   


While Cavedad was out getting
drunk Cavemom reflected on
the relationship and the part
she has played in it. But more
importantly how she really feels
about Cavedad

Cavemoms Thought Bubble

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In times of seperation
Hearts are split in two
Sentiment and reason
Confuse the heart and soul

Missing what I didn't love
Until the door was closed
Now I'm second guessing
My cold heart seems to warm

Digging deep for what it is
What I'm looking for
To have an expectation
Puts a burden on true love
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Cavemom decides that it would
be best if she stays in a motel
for a few days. She and Cavedad
will have to live together until
they decide what they are going
to do. A few days apart will help
them both. Just as she is about to
leave Cavedad stumbles home
drunk takes off his clothes and
passes out on the bed. Call it force
of habit or the fact that she still
cares she picks his clothes up off
the floor. As she is folding them a
piece of paper falls from his coat
pocket.

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Comments:

Oh the plot thickens lol...Ok I like the way this is playing out. Mom always still isa creature of habit but loves dad. She did have a heart all along but in times of picking greener pastures it always leads you home. Ok sorry i rambled on. Great piece.

Take Care,
Anastasia

Posted: Jan 14, 2009

Author Comment:



I like it when you ramble it always inspires me - Thanks as always

Atanacio
(not registered user)

I enjoy your Cave-People-- Non-Flintstoneish .. but you didn't keep me up on the new installment just for that.. To the Stone-Age With you or is it Stone-Cage.. Thanks for the read :)

Posted: Jan 15, 2009

Author Comment:



Sorry about that - It just dawned on me that I can leave a message on your page. LOL sometimes I don't see the obvious
Thank you for taking the time to comment and bringing it to my attention

Awwww...I wasn't ready for it to end yet. Good work as usual. Keep it coming and SOON!

Posted: Jan 15, 2009

Author Comment:



It's not over yet - Thanks for taking the time to comment

Fantasy Deception
(not registered user)

The plot does indeed thicken. Well penned.

xoxox
Fantasy

Posted: Jan 15, 2009

Author Comment:


Thank you for taking time to comment There is more to come

Is old Cavedad worth her effort? Is she worth his??? All this and more, some time in the future. You are really enjoying the suspence huh?

Posted: Jan 15, 2009

Author Comment:



Suspense What suspense? We will have to wait and see - Thanks as always for taking time to comment

Awwww I am now left wondering whether Cavemom is going to take the risk and fall back head over heels with CaveDad? Hmmmm Ok Ok .... I know you will tell me.

Great read as usual........makes my day!

hugs
Vee

Posted: Jan 16, 2009

Author Comment:



Thank you for taking time to comment - In all honesty I don't know what is coming next it will be a surprise to both of us

Suspense... I know Cavemom loves him deep inside but I wanna see her pick up that knife... (dig this series)

Posted: Jan 16, 2009

Author Comment:



LOL The suspense is killing me too - Thanks for taking time to comment

I have a feeling Cavedad has an affair and cavemom needs to take her time to re evaluate....this relationship

Posted: Jan 17, 2009

Author Comment:



I like the way Cavemom is handling things Thanks again

Hi MTM ;)

As always, an intriguing read.

I love the poetry coming out of you through Cavemom.

Love It!!

Smiles,
Ann

Posted: Jan 19, 2009

Author Comment:



Thank you as always for following the work and taking the time to comment



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