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Forbidden Love(Intro to my new book)

Short Story By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


This is the introduction to my new book, Forbidden Love, that I'm in the process of writing. I will be posting to first few chapters soon, but read this 1st and tell me if I should post my book. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 230    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


Intro:

POV: Jasmine

I am just a normal 14 year-old girl. I’m smart, yet beautiful. My eyes are a beautiful ocean blue, my hair, a golden, beachy blonde. I have everything a teenage girl could want: a perfect family, plenty of friends, and great grades. The only thing missing is a boyfriend. It’s not like nobody likes me, it’s just that I’m looking for the perfect guy, and no one I’ve met have been it. I just hope this new school year holds adventure, excitement, and possibly that perfect guy. But I’m too optimistic, no school year can be that perfect, but, you never know- anything can happen. School starts tomorrow, and it’ll be my first day of high school. I’m so excited! Well, it’s 10:00, I gotta get to bed. I probably won’t sleep a bit. I changed into my pajamas and got ready for bed. Well, maybe this year will be everything I hoped for. I turned out the lights, hopped in my bed, and tried to get some sleep. As I lay in my bed, the one thing I least expected was that my year would turn out exactly as I hoped for. But what I didn’t know, was that I was wrong.

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Comments:

hey this was good :)
but sorry for me saying i think you have put as little more detail in to it, but otherwise i think you should post more :)

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting!

you know how much i love this, oh, i love this story soooooooo much!!! haha luv ya girl!!!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I know you love it, girl, and I'm glad.♥ Love ya too!

good beginning. hope to read more.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

ouuuuuu, great intro, really brought out my anticipation for the next part. keep me updated luv, this seems great!
Steph(:

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok, I will let you know when I post the 1st chapter and I'm glad that you like it.♥

a vampire fic??? keep me posted:)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok, I will. Thanks for commenting!

nice begining
can't wait for more!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting!

Great beggining. It really sounds good. Could you read my Novel (Or Poetry) and tell me what you think?

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I've already posted the 1st 5 chapters of the book, so read them as well. I'm leaving this Saturday for vacation for 2 weeks, but when I get back, I'll try to remember to read your novel and poetry.

its really good- but by putting, "the one thing I least expected was that my year would turn out exactly as I hoped for. But what I didn’t know, was that I was wrong," dont you think you told everyone how the story would end? just like she wanted it to?

i love it though, and plan to read more =)

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting!



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