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The Mystery Girl

Short story By: SilentFlower
Romance


This girl is different from the rest. So while this vacation lasts, Jake Lee does everything he can to get to know her more.


Submitted:Mar 6, 2013    Reads: 148    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


I wouldn't be here if it wasn't for my sister. You see, we went to Hawaii on vacation, but I have nothing to do. So here I am in my hotel room watching TV, when there's a knock on the door.

"Room service!" A female voice said.

"I never ordered room service..." I said to the girl. She looked like she's around my age, maybe older.

"Oh." She looked down in embarrassment. "Do you know what room Anne Lee is in?" So that was who the food was for! Such a crazy girl, I mean who orders room service and just leaves the hotel?

"Yes, she's my sister I'll tell her later." I said before taking the food from her. Right when she was going to leave I stopped her.

"Um... Can I get your number?" I said shyly before I looked down because my face went red.

"Oh sure, um, just hand me your phone." I did as she said and she entered her number before leaving.

Later that day I got a text from her.

Mystery Girl: Hi! Can I ask why you wanted my number?

Don't ask why I called her that. I just did. I thought about my answer. I couldn't just say 'Cuz ur pretty! Let's go out!' I replied with: Um... I was wondering if you wanted to hang out...

Mystery Girl: Okay! See u l8r!

Soon there was a knock on the door and she was right there.

"Hello! Let's go!" She said. I nodded.

Before we knew it, it was already 10 in the evening.

"We should go now, your sister will be waiting." I nodded and we left.

"Hi! How was your day with the pretty room service girl?" Anne asked as soon as I got back to the hotel.

"It was really f-Wait, how did you know?" She only smiled.

"I set you up! I'm not that crazy, ordering room service without waiting to get it. You think that was a mistake? I wanted you to enjoy your vacation! You always just relax and watch TV or something." She rolled her eyes.

"Oh," was all I could say. I really underestimate my sister.

"Oh yeah! It's our last day, so we have to get ready to go and we leave tomorrow morning." I was surprised.

"What?" She nodded and I started packing, which only took me 15 minutes (I'm fast at packing). After that I texted Mystery Girl.

Me: I'm leaving tomorrow :(

Mystery Girl: Aw :( It was fun while it lasted (a day :P)

Me: Yea. Bye! Keep in touch 'kay?

Mystery Girl: I will :)

The next day we went back home. I never stopped thinking about Mystery Girl. It's been a week since I last saw her. Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

"Aloha!" A familiar voice said. I looked in shock she was here!

She laughed. "Surprise!"




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