Interesting Steph, personal maybe? I liked the alternate ending. There is still a long way to go.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

Stephen, i have read so many short stories....but nothing like this....
U should have seen my face beaming with surprise and happiness at the same time...I loved both the endings....BOTH the endings proved me that there is no end to life....
Will u promise to come up with these lids of stories more and more and more.....and more....

I love short stories but this one is more than one....THIS IS ...this is....oh...me speechless....

Going for " i like it" button and wait for u to write more stories like this.

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

this had t come in top 20...this is my favourite.....all time

Posted: May 8, 2008

Wicked, loving the alternate endings! write more!

Posted: May 8, 2008

o wow that was awesome. i'm not exactly sure what it was, but it is very inspiring.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 9, 2008

ehhh i honestly didn't like the alternate ending. yeah it was good... but i thought the first ending was best. the first one was so romantic because she looks up and its like her own angel is standing over her and its the man she loves. the second ending, yes it opens new doors, but she's in love with the other guy and with this new guy, Edward Villeneuve, popping in, it just throws the story off balance. at least thats what i thought. though i still loved it. it was entertaining, short, and beautifully written. :)

Posted: May 14, 2008

Wow.
I really liked it. I usually don't look at short stories because I love to read and hate to only read a wittle bit but this title caught my eye and i have to say that im really glad it did. Your story made me smile. I loved the first ending but the alt. ending was really cute too.
=]
-Ally

Posted: May 15, 2008