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Fallen Stars Rising 2

Novel By: Alquimista
Science Fiction


A tale about the evolution of Male and Female principles View table of contents...

Chapters:

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Submitted: Jun 2, 2008    Reads: 26    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


::Azucena::

The shuttle eased onto the landing strip and for a brief moment, I thought we were still airborne.  I realized it was the motion of the waves, seesawing in a rhythmic lull. 

Nyu produced a small bottle.  “This will help.”

I shook my head.  “I’ll be alright.  Thanks.”

I closed my eyes and let myself drift in the undulating displacements of the sea.  On the surface of this planet, I was no longer master of my body.  I belonged to the g-forces that dragged me down in a primordial spiral of possession. Gravity, I thought, was the ultimate fall.


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Comments:

I'm lost!
Are they on earth?


Gravity IS the ultimate fall as I peer down at my body.
sigh. bigger sigh.

Are they wearing big michelan man suits? that just is what I saw here.

outstanding writing is what i expect of you now and you never fail me. love every crazy chapter.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

No worries, I'm confused too. These crazy characters keep jumping around and it's hard to get a hold of them. It feels like they're taking me for a ride. =)



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