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Fallen Stars Rising 2

Novel By: Alquimista
Science Fiction


A tale about the evolution of Male and Female principles View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 23, 2008    Reads: 14    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


::Aleister::


The sound of splashing water woke me up, and my fingers reflexively slid around my staff.

“Water is so delightful.”

Jazmine stood in the middle of the stream, her diaphanous gown raised just above her ankles. She kicked the water and droplets shimmered across the air.

“Whenever Rachel goes away on business, she puts me in self-preservation mode. Just in case she doesn’t come back, then I’ll be free to carry out her last instructions.”

She waded across the water and knelt beside me.

“Do tell,” I said.

“I cannot.”

“Why not?”

You are a variable in the equation.”


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Comments:

Ouch.

I DO love these small chapters...but it's almost as if each chapter is a different story that has nothing to do with the last? DOesn't matter...lovin your writing.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm happy you like my writing in spite of its fragmentary nature. =)

I wished you wrote one of these everyday. Just like this one.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for your encouraging comments. I will try to post more frequently so the story feels more coherent. =)



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