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Fallen Stars Rising 2

Novel By: Alquimista
Science Fiction


A tale about the evolution of Male and Female principles View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 9, 2008    Reads: 18    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


::Azucena::

In the beginning…

There was no “in”.

There was no “the”.

There was no “beginning…”

Without form, yet pure and tranquil.  Forever nameless.  Nonetheless, I must speak of this beginning without end, of this paradoxical is-ness embedded in the matrices of ancient consciousness.

God, what was happening to me?  I thought Marie-Rose said this would be harmless. If by harmless she meant being thrown into a maelstrom of mysticism to the point of not knowing your ass from a hole in the fabric of space-time, then I supposed she was right. 

Oh, he better be worth it.


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Comments:

matrices of ancient consciousness...my fav.

ALso...I say this often "Oh, he better be worth it" OFTEN!

Perfect, such few words leave such huge indentations.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx so much. It's good to see I'm not so off track. Writing from a woman's point of view is one of the biggest challenges I've encountered in writing. The men's point of view is easy: food, beer, sex, sleep... =)



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