Chapter 1/Prologue
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Dragons have entered in a full scale, planetary war with humans in the year 2125 and it continues to rage on into the year 2354, where the story begins, following the military career of a young, nano-bot enhanced super soldier named Theodore. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 31, 2008 Reads: 112 Comments: 10 Likes: 4
Chapter 1/Prologue
December 25th, 589
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Wait...your summary shows a combination of science fiction and fantasy. But it is pretty cool, starting out in dates.
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
I WANT CHAP 1
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
The beginning is pretty good, I like your the way your plot is going. So far I haven't read about any vampires yet and its a refreshing change, lol! That's a bit hypocritical of me since I'm writing a novel about vampires, but wtv. ^^ The only thing that's bothering me a little is um.. the paragraphing. It looks just a little crammed up, so maybe if you spaced it out just a little? and DON"T CHANGE THE FONT! I love it the way it is! so.... yeah, that's all. I'm sorry
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
*continuing* I'm sorry if it sounded mean, it wasn't meant to be kay?? (: - Cher
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
Awesome! glad to get a bit of history on the war between the dragons and the humans. This is getting really good, can't wait to read on.
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
yay! dragons!
I like the stroy is from the point of veiw from the dragons, not the 'noble' knights who go around slaying dragons.
this looks promising
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
hi! ian.
1. IAN: Your first name of Ian creates a serious, thoughtful nature, shrewd, efficient, and business-minded. You are one to make your own decisions, and not be influenced by others. You desire independence and freedom from the authority and interference of others. You are not overly ambitious, preferring instead to seek stable, settled conditions which are adequate to meet your responsibilities. You like to be your own boss and you are capable of handling responsibilities for others.
1. IAN MACKENZIE DOLAN: There are 17 letters in your name. Those 17 letters total to 76. There are 8 vowels and 9 consonants in your name.
What your first name means: Scottish Male Gift from God The Gaelic form of the name John.
Hebrew Male Gift from God.
Your number is: 4
The characteristics of #4 are: A foundation, order, service, struggle against limits, steady growth.
The expression or destiny for #4: Order, service, and management are the cornerstones of the number 4 Expression. Your destiny is to express wonderful organization skills with your ever practical, down-to-earth approach. You are the kind of person who is always willing to work those long, hard hours to push a project through to completion. A patience with detail allows you to become expert in fields such as building, engineering, and all forms of craftsmanship. Your abilities to write and teach may lean toward the more technical and detailed. In the arts, music will likely be your choice. Artistic talents may also appear in such fields as horiculture and floral arrangement, as well. Many skilled physicians and especially surgeons have the 4 Expression.
The positive attitudes of the 4 Expression yield responsibility; you are one who no doubt, fulfills obligations, and is highly systematic and orderly. You are serious and sincere, honest and faithful. It is your role to help and you are required to do a good job at everything you undertake.
If there is too much 4 energies present in your makeup, you may express some of the negative attitudes of the number 4. The obligations that you face may tend to create frustration and feelings of limitation or restriction. You may sometimes find yourself nursing negative attitudes in this regard and these can keep you in a rather low mood. Avoid becoming too rigid, stubborn, dogmatic, and fixed in your opinions. You may have a tendency to develop and hold very strong likes and dislikes, and some of these may border on the classification of prejudice. The negative side of 4 often produces dominant and bossy individuals who use disciplinarian to an excess. These tendencies must be avoided. Finally, like nearly all with 4 Expression, you must keep your eye on the big picture and not get overly wrapped up in detail and routine.
Your Soul Urge number is: 1
A Soul Urge number of 1 means: Your Soul Urge is the number 1. With a Soul Urge number of 1, you want to lead and direct, to work independent of supervision, by yourself or with subordinates. You take pride in your abilities and want to be recognized for them. You may seek opportunities to display your strength and usefulness, wanting to create and originate. In your desire to manage the big picture and the main issues, you may often leave the details to others.
The positive 1 Soul Urge is Ambitious and determined, a leader seeking opportunities. There is a great deal of honesty and loyalty in this character. If you possess positive 1 Soul Urge qualities, you are very attainment oriented and driven to success. You are a loyal friend and strictly fair in your business dealings.
The negative side of the 1 Soul Urge must be avoided. A negative 1 is apt to dominate situations and people; the home, the spouse, the family and the business. Emotions aren't strong in this nature. If you possess an excess of 1 energy, you may, at times, be boastful and egotistic. You must avoid being too critical and impatient of trifles. The great need of the 1 Soul Urge is the development of friendliness, and a sincere interest in people.
Your Inner Dream number is: 3
An Inner Dream number of 3 means: You dream of artistic expression; writing, painting, music. You would seek to more freely express your inner feeling and obtain more enjoyment from life. You also dream of being more popular, likable, and appreciated.
3. FEB 17, 1991: Your date of conception was on or about 27 May 1990 which was a Sunday. You were born on a Sunday under the astrological sign Aquarius. Your Life path number is 3.
Your fortune cookie reads: One who admires you greatly is hidden before your eyes.
Life Path Compatibility: You are most compatible with those with the Life Path numbers 3, 6 & 9.
You should get along well with those with the Life Path numbers 1, 2, 5 & 11.
You are least compatible with those with the Life Path numbers 4, 7, 8 & 22.
The Julian calendar date of your birth is 2448304.5.
The golden number for 1991 is 16.
The epact number for 1991 is 14.
The year 1991 was not a leap year.
Your birthday falls into the Chinese year beginning 2/15/1991 and ending 2/3/1992. You were born in the Chinese year of the Goat.
Your Native American Zodiac sign is Otter; your plant is Fern.
You were born in the Egyptian month of Parmuthy, the fourth month of the season of Poret (Emergence - Fertile soil).
Your date of birth on the Hebrew calendar is 3 AdarI 5751. Or if you were born after sundown then the date is 4 AdarI 5751.
The Mayan Calendar long count date of your birthday is 12.18.17.15.0 which is 12 baktun 18 katun 17 tun 15 uinal 0 kin
The Hijra (Islamic Calendar) date of your birth is Sunday, 2 Sha'ban 1411 (1411-8-2).
The date of Easter on your birth year was Sunday, 31 March 1991.
The date of Orthodox Easter on your birth year was Sunday, 7 April 1991.
The date of Ash Wednesday (the first day of Lent) on your birth year was Wednesday 13 February 1991.
The date of Whitsun (Pentecost Sunday) in the year of your birth was Sunday 19 May 1991.
The date of Whisuntide in the year of your birth was Sunday 26 May 1991.
The date of Rosh Hashanah in the year of your birth was Tuesday, 10 September 1991.
The date of Passover in the year of your birth was Sunday, 31 March 1991.
The date of Mardi Gras on your birth year was Tuesday 12 February 1991.
As of 10/2/2008 2:26:00 AM EDT: You are 17 years old. You are 212 months old. You are 919 weeks old. You are 6,437 days old. You are 154,490 hours old. You are 9,269,426 minutes old. You are 556,165,560 seconds old.
Celebrities who share your birthday:
Joseph Gordon-Levitt (1981) Paris Hilton (1981) Jerry O'Connell (1974)
Bryan White (1974) Billie Joe Armstrong (1972) Denise Richards (1972)
Michael Jordan (1963) Rene Russo (1954) Jim Brown (1936)
Alan Bates (1934) Hal Holbrook (1925) Arthur Kennedy (1914)
Red Barber (1908)
Top songs of 1991
I Do It for You by Bryan Adams I Wanna Sex You Up by Color Me Badd
Gonna Make You Sweat by C & C Music Factory Rush, Rush by Paula Abdul
One More Try by Timmy T. Unbelievable by EMF
More Than Words by Extreme I Like the Way by Hi-Five
The First Time by Surface Baby Baby by Amy Grant
Your age is the equivalent of a dog that is 2.51937377690802 years old. (Life's just a big chewy bone for you!)
Your lucky day is Saturday. Your lucky number is 4 & 8. Your ruling planet(s) is Saturn & Uranus. Your lucky dates are 1st, 10th, 19th, 28th. Your opposition sign is Leo. Your opposition number(s) is 1. Today is one of your lucky days!
There are 138 days till your next birthday on which your cake will have 18 candles. Those 18 candles produce 18 BTUs, or 4,536 calories of heat (that's only 4.5360 food Calories!). You can boil 2.06 US ounces of water with that many candles.
In 1991 there were approximately 4.1 million births in the US.
In 1991 the US population was approximately 248,709,873 people, 70.3 persons per square mile.
In 1991 in the US there were 2,371,000 marriages (9.4%) and 1,187,000 divorces (4.7%)
In 1991 in the US there were approximately 2,148,000 deaths (8.6 per 1000)
In the US a new person is born approximately every 8 seconds.
In the US one person dies approximately every 12 seconds.
In 1991 the population of Australia was approximately 17,387,023.
In 1991 there were approximately 257,247 births in Australia.
In 1991 in Australia there were approximately 113,869 marriages and 45,652 divorces.
In 1991 in Australia there were approximately 119,146 deaths.
Your birthstone is Amethyst. The Mystical properties of Amethyst: Amethyst is used to increase spiritually. Some lists consider these stones to be your birthstone. (Birthstone lists come from Jewelers, Tibet, Ayurvedic Indian medicine, and other sources). Bloodstone, Onyx, Moonstone
Your birth tree is Cedar, the Confidence. Of rare beauty, knows how to adapt, likes luxury, of good health not in the least shy, tends to look down on others, self-confident, determined, impatient, wants to impress others, many talents, industrious, healthy, optimism, waiting for the one true love, able to make quick decisions.
There are 84 days till Christmas 2008!
There are 97 days till Orthodox Christmas!
The moon's phase on the day you were born was waxing crescent.
Posted: Oct 1, 2008
Hey i think that was a pretty good story. There was something in it that bothered me thou ; ( I think it seemed like you were telling us information more then making as experience it. It just seemed kind of..cold. But you are very neat in your writing and as much as i tried i came upon no mistakes, lol.
Posted: Oct 6, 2008
there's definite reason for your fiance to enjoy your writing other than the obvious(:
you're writing is so neat and descriptive.
but like canine said^^ i felt like you were telling me, rahter than really showing me. it's quite informational. like, text books tell, stories show. does that make sense?
i'm not sure. i'm sorry if that's confusing.
L.
Posted: Oct 23, 2008
As an earlier reviewer said, writing from the point of view of the dragon is a novel twist (no pun intended)
Keep fine-tuning your writing, you have a good concept and a good first draft -- it's not supposed to be easy. Who knows, maybe Steven Spielberg will consider it for a future film!
Posted: Oct 30, 2008
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