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BUKKAKE BRAWL - Bizarro Micro Serial Fiction

Novel By: junkdnafiction
Science Fiction


Mei is an indentured fighter in the Bukkake Brawl pits. She must survive sex, violence, and sharks as she claws her way out of the foul septic tank that is the floating city of Yue Fong.

BUKKAKE BRAWL is an ongoing fiction piece published as an SMS-delivered micro serial @ http://www.twitter.com/junkdnafiction. I am publishing here (and @ several other sites) simultaneously. Updates are Monday - Wednesday - Friday, Tokyo Standard Time.

This is not supposed to be high literary fiction. It's just meant to be a quick enjoyment fix. So far, I have garnered myself a few loyal fans. (Happy I mentioned you now, Mom?) And that has made it all the worthwhile.

Comments always welcome. View table of contents...

Chapters:

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Submitted: Oct 18, 2007    Reads: 70    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


To top it off, her nose sat in geosync orbit above her face, throbbing on a rather disturbing frequency called GODASSMOTHERDOGWHORE.

Other than all that, it was a perfect day to be dead.

The room boasted three other beds stacked bunk-like, one on the wall opposite her was occupied.

A bipolar light panel, gripping the ceiling for dear life, lit the room in skitterish, spastic waves.

And the echoes of hallway phantoms leaked through the waif of a sliding sheet metal door.


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Comments:

nice, but what happened to her when she blacked out? i assume she was "savaged" in the pit.

Posted: Oct 18, 2007

Author Comment:

All in due time. ;)

I'm not usually one for erotica, but this is rather interesting.

Posted: Oct 21, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks much! and you are right, this is NOT erotica, though i have included the tag for those who might find the similarities. no mushy, gooey scenes here, only hardcore action, and not even 'sex' really, just sexual activity. and just so you don't think you are alone, here's what one other gentleman reader had to say:

vaspers: "I hate porn, but I like your "cyber-porn" surrealism. It is very inventive, bizarre, and funny. Intriguing. Way to go."

then:

vaspers: "junkdnafiction is, to my aesthetic radar, Dada anti-cyber-p0rn, and anti-vi0lence, it takes them to an insane and funny-sick extreme!"

and finally:

vaspers: "junkdnafiction - Your ultra-vi0lent surrealist pseud0-cyber-p0rn cha0s extremes are so bizarre & artistically clever, it's inspiring. Sick."

at first, i wasnt sure what to make of his comments. but then i realized each reader reads fiction exactly how s/h wants to, and as long as they enjoy it, that's fine with me. it is NOT my place to dictate how my fiction should be read, nor is it my goal. i just hope that people enjoy it.

kindest regards,
Made in DNA

Your story always cheers me up. Just can't read it without smiling.

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Dragonfly. that's one of the best comments a writer can get.



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