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The gang got stuck in the Himalayan Mt. and there are creatures there that want to get them. Can the gang get out of the mountains before they're next? View table of contents...


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Submitted:Oct 22, 2011    Reads: 13    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   

The Prologue

frown The breathing of the monster slowed down. I stared up at the white creature with scared frighten eyes. I stayed in the crack I was hidden in, not breathing. I was afraid and I didn't know what this thing was. The monster looked around and took a long gaspy breath. This monster was holding my friend against it's shoulder. I shuddered under the cold. The monster grunted and let Kirby fall to the ground. He was out cold. I sank into the crack some more. I heard a loud crash then footsteps descending away. I looked at Kirby who was gasping with air. I reached out of the crack and reached for Kirby. My hand reached his foot. I pulled on it.

surpriseThen all of a sudden something big and hairy grabbed my arm and pulled me out of the crack. I screamed! The hairy beast grabbed both of my arms and lifted me up to face height. The monster did a vicious, scary, and agressive yell in my face. I turned away in fear. Tears started rolling down my face. The creature then held me like a baby. I must of looked like a baby, with my white fluffy jacket and my pinkish white face. I felt warm. Warm, hot, tears ran down my face.


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