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A young Prince from planet Saturn is forced to leave his planet and go to Earth after his girlfriend is brutally murdered before his eyes. Once he gets there he is faced with a decision. Is he there to get vengeance or is he there to protect the people? View table of contents...


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Essel: Chapter 1- Trigger

Saturn... Other than it's beautiful rings, very few people know anything about this planet. However, we have no clue, that this planet will soon give our planet a great gift. The people from this planet were extremely strong, being able to practically kill an average human with almost no effort. But there was a legend that one of them would become the strongest to ever live and the whole universe would benefit from his power.

Now, in planet Saturn, King Alistair and his wife Penelope were expecting their 3rd child, Queen Penelope was saved from her alcoholic parents of planet Earth when she was 16, and King Alistair fell in love with her and quickly made her his wife. There was great expectations on this 3rd child, his 2 older brothers had been born with great power that everyone in the Kingdom was very surprised, Harold was only 6 years old at the time, and his younger brother Arux was 4, both of them were very excited about having a baby brother.

"He is so cute honey", said Queen Penelope.

"Yes, indeed, and his eyes look a lot like yours" replied the King

"Congratulations to you both," said the doctor; "now everything is ready for the test sir"

The doctor took the young Prince to a small room, and after an hour, he was very surprised to see the results.

"My King!", shouted the doctor. "My King, your son..."

"What is it doctor? Is everything ok?"

"Oh, yes! But you are not going to believe me when I tell you the results"

"Well, say it now, what are you waiting for?" ; the Queen retorted.

"The young prince... he is more powerful than anyone ever expected! He is... he is even more powerful than both of his brothers now!"

"Are you telling me that my newborn son is stronger than my two older sons?" said the King.

"yes, sir!" replied the doctor.

Now both the King and the Queen looked very surprised. "is unbelievable!" said the Queen; "do you think he is... no.. he can't possibly be the... legendary warrior your Kingdom has been waiting for, can he?"

" I don't know yet, maybe he is, but it is still hard to believe."

Prince Zurn became more and more powerful everyday, but not only that, the whole kingdom liked him because of his kindness and humility, very different from other members of the royal family. He was often training with his older brothers, trying to find ways to become stronger. Now years have passed and his older brothers were 20 and 18 respectively. Prince Zurn had fallen in love with a poor, but beautiful lady in the kingdom. Her eyes looked like blue diamonds, and her body was the envy of every woman. She developed a very close relationship with Zurn as they both talked about getting married in the future and living in a peaceful forest with rabbits and chickens and every animal they could have. Zurn liked her even more because they shared the same interest to books and she liked to write stories hoping to one day be a famous writer. They had been talking about living together in the future and have a family. One day she went to the Castle to visit her boyfriend.

"Zurn! Zurn!"; she said, "where are you?"

"I am here Roxanne!" replied Zurn.

" I want to talk to you about something."

"Well, what is it?"

"I wrote a beautiful story, and it looks like I will be able to publish it, you know I always wanted to be a writer, and the King has given me the opportunity to do so. And this story is so good!"

"That is great! What is it about?"

"Is a story about a hero. Is not quite done yet but I will finish it soon. I named him Essel"

She hugged him and kissed him like it was the last time she was going to see him. And then left to tell her parents about the good news. The Prince was so happy for her that he was preparing a party for her, he wanted to let her know that he was always going to be there for her when she needed him and that he loved her with all his heart. But then his brother Harold came in.

"Zurn, we have to go!"; he said

"And why are you in such a rush?" Zurn replied.

"I will tell you once we are safe, come with me!"

They both flew to an underground place that only the royal family and a few servants knew about. And there, Harold told Zurn everything, the East Kingdom wanted to kill everyone in their kingdom, they wanted to conquer their land and they were in the middle of a war. He also told him that they had killed a few people from the small town of Orokovix.

"But that is where Roxanne and her family live!" said Zurn worried.

"Yes I know!"; replied Harold, "but we are fighting as strong as we can to get the whole town to safety. But our father decided you must stay here and protect everyone in this underground place, all our women and children stayed here. I must go, dad, Arux and the whole Kingdom needs me, you stay and protect our women, our children and the elders"

Zurn could not believe it, his girlfriend was in great danger and he could not do anything about it. He wanted to go to the town and see if she was alright, and if necessary bring her and her family to safety. His mother then called him, she wanted to talk to him.

"Why are you so worried? Are you ok?" she asked.

"I am fine, I am just worried about Roxanne, maybe she needs my help. I can't do anything about it"

"Well, I am pretty sure we will all be fine,"; she said.

"If you want you can go get your girlfriend, but just her, her family must stay where they are, no one else besides the royal family must enter here. Do you understand me?"

"Yes mother, thank you"

"You're welcome, don't worry about us, we'll be fine"

The Prince smiled and then left, hoping to find his girlfriend and bring her to safety. He arrived to his girlfriends house but couldn't find anyone, or Roxanne anywhere. He then thought that she was safe, so he was searching for a place she probably could have hidden. Then he saw 3 men and inside their vehicle he saw Roxanne, she looked like she had been crying for hours, but when she saw him, she had a face of relief, she knew that she was going to be fine with her boyfriend entering the scene.

"Whatever you are doing stop now!!" said Zurn angry.

"Oh look, the young prince Zurn came to the rescue, do you even know who we are?" said one of the men.

"looks to me like you are just a bunch of idiots wearing tight clothes" replied Zurn.

"I am disappointed Prince I thought you knew more than that, we are Angel, Arnold and Arthur. It is a great pleasure to meet you. But you don't know what you are up against, we are the best warriors of the East." said Arnold.

"You look more like circus clowns to me."

"Well, think whatever you want to think, we will show you that when we want something out of your land, we can take it anytime, including this beautiful woman." said Angel.

Angel and Arthur got into an intense battle with Zurn. But Zurn had not seen men like these before, they did have great power. The battle was so intense that all three men were badly wounded. But nobody was going to stop them. Arnold, the one that stayed with Roxanne, took out his knife and without thinking it twice he stabbed the beautiful Roxanne before Zurn's eyes.

He could not believe it, the girl that he loved had just been killed. He was so shocked that a punch by Angel felt like a bunch of elephants going at you at full speed. He fell to the ground. And then Angel winked and said:

"We will go to another planet, kid, the people in that planet call it... Earth. We will conquer them, I want you to be there, you are fun to be around."

They laughed and left without saying anything else to Zurn. Zurn just sat there, next to the girl he loved dearly, without saying a single word. As he started crying realizing she was gone, he said, I will avenge you Roxanne, no matter what happens from now on, you will always be in my heart, then he buried her next to a river around her house.

He left, and told everyone in the royal family what had happened. They all were very sad to hear it, a lot of people had died that day, even though they had won the battle. And a week later...

"Father, mother, I must go now. I will do what I need to do. I must avenge her at any cost."

"May God be with you my son," said the King. "I hope you accomplish what you want to."

"Good-Bye my son, and remember, you must talk to the President himself before you do anything." said the Queen.

"I will mom, thank you."

"Well brother, I wish you the best and remember that we will always be here for you." said Arux.

"Don't forget where you came from, and come back safely Zurn." said Harold.

"I shall not be called Zurn anymore," said the Prince.

"And what shall we call you?" said the King.

"Call me Essel"

Essel: Chapter 1- Trigger

Saturn... Other than it's beautiful rings, very few people know anything about this planet. However, we have no clue, that this planet will soon give our planet a great gift. The people from this planet were extremely strong, being able to practically kill an average human with almost no effort. But there was a legend that one of them would become the strongest to ever live and the whole universe would benefit from his power.

Now, in planet Saturn, King Alistair and his wife Penelope were expecting their 3rd child, Queen Penelope was saved from her alcoholic parents of planet Earth when she was 16, and King Alistair fell in love with her and quickly made her his wife. There was great expectations on this 3rd child, his 2 older brothers had been born with great power that everyone in the Kingdom was very surprised, Harold was only 6 years old at the time, and his younger brother Arux was 4, both of them were very excited about having a baby brother.

"He is so cute honey", said Queen Penelope.

"Yes, indeed, and his eyes look a lot like yours" replied the King

"Congratulations to you both," said the doctor; "now everything is ready for the test sir"

The doctor took the young Prince to a small room, and after an hour, he was very surprised to see the results.

"My King!", shouted the doctor. "My King, your son..."

"What is it doctor? Is everything ok?"

"Oh, yes! But you are not going to believe me when I tell you the results"

"Well, say it now, what are you waiting for?" ; the Queen retorted.

"The young prince... he is more powerful than anyone ever expected! He is... he is even more powerful than both of his brothers now!"

"Are you telling me that my newborn son is stronger than my two older sons?" said the King.

"yes, sir!" replied the doctor.

Now both the King and the Queen looked very surprised. "is unbelievable!" said the Queen; "do you think he is... no.. he can't possibly be the... legendary warrior your Kingdom has been waiting for, can he?"

" I don't know yet, maybe he is, but it is still hard to believe."

Prince Zurn became more and more powerful everyday, but not only that, the whole kingdom liked him because of his kindness and humility, very different from other members of the royal family. He was often training with his older brothers, trying to find ways to become stronger. Now years have passed and his older brothers were 20 and 18 respectively. Prince Zurn had fallen in love with a poor, but beautiful lady in the kingdom. Her eyes looked like blue diamonds, and her body was the envy of every woman. She developed a very close relationship with Zurn as they both talked about getting married in the future and living in a peaceful forest with rabbits and chickens and every animal they could have. Zurn liked her even more because they shared the same interest to books and she liked to write stories hoping to one day be a famous writer. They had been talking about living together in the future and have a family. One day she went to the Castle to visit her boyfriend.

"Zurn! Zurn!"; she said, "where are you?"

"I am here Roxanne!" replied Zurn.

" I want to talk to you about something."

"Well, what is it?"

"I wrote a beautiful story, and it looks like I will be able to publish it, you know I always wanted to be a writer, and the King has given me the opportunity to do so. And this story is so good!"

"That is great! What is it about?"

"Is a story about a hero. Is not quite done yet but I will finish it soon. I named him Essel"

She hugged him and kissed him like it was the last time she was going to see him. And then left to tell her parents about the good news. The Prince was so happy for her that he was preparing a party for her, he wanted to let her know that he was always going to be there for her when she needed him and that he loved her with all his heart. But then his brother Harold came in.

"Zurn, we have to go!"; he said

"And why are you in such a rush?" Zurn replied.

"I will tell you once we are safe, come with me!"

They both flew to an underground place that only the royal family and a few servants knew about. And there, Harold told Zurn everything, the East Kingdom wanted to kill everyone in their kingdom, they wanted to conquer their land and they were in the middle of a war. He also told him that they had killed a few people from the small town of Orokovix.

"But that is where Roxanne and her family live!" said Zurn worried.

"Yes I know!"; replied Harold, "but we are fighting as strong as we can to get the whole town to safety. But our father decided you must stay here and protect everyone in this underground place, all our women and children stayed here. I must go, dad, Arux and the whole Kingdom needs me, you stay and protect our women, our children and the elders"

Zurn could not believe it, his girlfriend was in great danger and he could not do anything about it. He wanted to go to the town and see if she was alright, and if necessary bring her and her family to safety. His mother then called him, she wanted to talk to him.

"Why are you so worried? Are you ok?" she asked.

"I am fine, I am just worried about Roxanne, maybe she needs my help. I can't do anything about it"

"Well, I am pretty sure we will all be fine,"; she said.

"If you want you can go get your girlfriend, but just her, her family must stay where they are, no one else besides the royal family must enter here. Do you understand me?"

"Yes mother, thank you"

"You're welcome, don't worry about us, we'll be fine"

The Prince smiled and then left, hoping to find his girlfriend and bring her to safety. He arrived to his girlfriends house but couldn't find anyone, or Roxanne anywhere. He then thought that she was safe, so he was searching for a place she probably could have hidden. Then he saw 3 men and inside their vehicle he saw Roxanne, she looked like she had been crying for hours, but when she saw him, she had a face of relief, she knew that she was going to be fine with her boyfriend entering the scene.

"Whatever you are doing stop now!!" said Zurn angry.

"Oh look, the young prince Zurn came to the rescue, do you even know who we are?" said one of the men.

"looks to me like you are just a bunch of idiots wearing tight clothes" replied Zurn.

"I am disappointed Prince I thought you knew more than that, we are Angel, Arnold and Arthur. It is a great pleasure to meet you. But you don't know what you are up against, we are the best warriors of the East." said Arnold.

"You look more like circus clowns to me."

"Well, think whatever you want to think, we will show you that when we want something out of your land, we can take it anytime, including this beautiful woman." said Angel.

Angel and Arthur got into an intense battle with Zurn. But Zurn had not seen men like these before, they did have great power. The battle was so intense that all three men were badly wounded. But nobody was going to stop them. Arnold, the one that stayed with Roxanne, took out his knife and without thinking it twice he stabbed the beautiful Roxanne before Zurn's eyes.

He could not believe it, the girl that he loved had just been killed. He was so shocked that a punch by Angel felt like a bunch of elephants going at you at full speed. He fell to the ground. And then Angel winked and said:

"We will go to another planet, kid, the people in that planet call it... Earth. We will conquer them, I want you to be there, you are fun to be around."

They laughed and left without saying anything else to Zurn. Zurn just sat there, next to the girl he loved dearly, without saying a single word. As he started crying realizing she was gone, he said, I will avenge you Roxanne, no matter what happens from now on, you will always be in my heart, then he buried her next to a river around her house.

He left, and told everyone in the royal family what had happened. They all were very sad to hear it, a lot of people had died that day, even though they had won the battle. And a week later...

"Father, mother, I must go now. I will do what I need to do. I must avenge her at any cost."

"May God be with you my son," said the King. "I hope you accomplish what you want to."

"Good-Bye my son, and remember, you must talk to the President himself before you do anything." said the Queen.

"I will mom, thank you."

"Well brother, I wish you the best and remember that we will always be here for you." said Arux.

"Don't forget where you came from, and come back safely Zurn." said Harold.

"I shall not be called Zurn anymore," said the Prince.

"And what shall we call you?" said the King.

"Call me Essel"





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