Amiss
the laughs
each kiss
how did it all go so amiss
you knocked me off my feet
was it fun to watch me fall
thats what i recall
you laughed at me
instead of picking me up
how did it all go oh so amuck
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Poem By: xxemoxbfsxx
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im tired of saying wat their bout. just read it 4 pete sake. View table of contents...
Submitted: Dec 30, 2007 Reads: 42 Comments: 2 Likes: 0
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Simple yet unique. I like it.
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Posted: Dec 30, 2007
Ahh, thats sad. :( Brilliant write though. As always you have a skill for conveying your feelings even with such simple words. Thanks for posting, it's good to read a few good poets on this site.
Posted: Dec 30, 2007
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