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Submitted: Dec 30, 2007    Reads: 42    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Amiss

the laughs

each kiss

how did it all go so amiss

 

you knocked me off my feet

was it fun to watch me fall

thats what i recall

 

you laughed at me

instead of picking me up

how did it all go oh so amuck


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Simple yet unique. I like it.

--Kcy:]

Posted: Dec 30, 2007

Author Comment:

it is simple and it is my first ryming poem.

Ahh, thats sad. :( Brilliant write though. As always you have a skill for conveying your feelings even with such simple words. Thanks for posting, it's good to read a few good poets on this site.

Posted: Dec 30, 2007

Author Comment:

thank u. ur great to. i'll never be as good as u tho.



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