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Submitted: Dec 29, 2007 Reads: 112 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
surface
♥deep beneath the surface of my thought pool is where you lie♥
♥you're always there........♥
♥in my dreams...♥
♥in my life♥
♥the thought of us NEVER GOES AWAY♥
♥the thougt of what we could be♥
♥or should be♥
♥lies deep beneath the surface of my thought pool♥
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ah yes! how intruding those thoughts can be LOL
but very, very nice****
I know, it is hard to get back on track when a man is on your mind LOL. best wishes.. have fun***katie
Posted: Dec 29, 2007
Bloody 'ell of a good write. You have an exceptional talent, this one is quite a bit shorter, and a completely different feel, but it penatrates the thoughts nonetheless. Thank you for sharing.
Posted: Dec 29, 2007
Yup yup, I've had them thoughts too but I tell meself if it wasn't ment to be then, I shouldn't force it true.
Posted: Jan 4, 2008
Lydia, here i am once again....this one is so emotional and sweet....i agree with Katie word by word....
never stop writing.....
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
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