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Submitted: Dec 29, 2007    Reads: 112    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


surface

♥deep beneath the surface of my thought pool is where you lie♥

♥you're always there........♥

♥in my dreams...♥

♥in my life♥

♥the thought of us NEVER GOES AWAY♥

♥the thougt of what we could be♥

♥or should be♥

♥lies deep beneath the surface of my thought pool♥


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ah yes! how intruding those thoughts can be LOL
but very, very nice****
I know, it is hard to get back on track when a man is on your mind LOL. best wishes.. have fun***katie

Posted: Dec 29, 2007

Author Comment:

thx, im iover it thats an old poem.

Bloody 'ell of a good write. You have an exceptional talent, this one is quite a bit shorter, and a completely different feel, but it penatrates the thoughts nonetheless. Thank you for sharing.

Posted: Dec 29, 2007

Author Comment:

thx

Yup yup, I've had them thoughts too but I tell meself if it wasn't ment to be then, I shouldn't force it true.

Posted: Jan 4, 2008

Author Comment:

well i would tell you the story but it is long. it is about sum1 i broke up with. thanks for the comment.
peace out.___xxemoxbfsxx___

Lydia, here i am once again....this one is so emotional and sweet....i agree with Katie word by word....
never stop writing.....

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you. this is the first poem i wrote for booksie, so i think i've improved since then.

Lydia_xxxx



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