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Eden's Heros 1 (The Spar)

Script By: EdensHeros
Science fiction


A fight between the two planet's prince's doesn't go as planned.


Submitted:Mar 23, 2009    Reads: 129    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Scene 1 Graduation

(King Jeremy stands on a stage in front of a podium speaking to a crowd of young recruits in

The Military Academy of Jawran's Auditorium)

Jeremy- I was 16 when I killed the King of Demon's and 18 when the people of Jawran appointed me there king and 20 when I first made contact with the settlers of planet Damon. They had become half demon and dangerous don't let these 43 years of peace fool you. The Damons want nothing more but to kill us. So when they come here you proud young warrior of Jawran well be there to stop them and save Jawran.

(claps and Cheers) (cuts to four anxious young recruits Danielle-young pale girl with black hair and blue eyes, Troy-Young black hair well tanned male, his little brother James also well tanned with dirty blond hair and brown eyes and Flank a dark brown skinned male tall and lean short black hair and brown hair)

Danielle- This needs to hurry up be over (leans back and closes her eyes) I'm fricken exhausted!

James- Honey shh! ( James hushes her ) show some respect it's the king.

(cuts back to King Jeremy on stage)

Jeremy- And now as we do with every graduating class I will now name the top five graduates from Jawran Military Academy. (reading from paper on podium) Number Five Hector Reinhardt Earth region Greece, Number Four Lei Young Earth region China, Number 3 Edward McDonald Earth region Britain, Number two Troy Brade earth region United States and Number one (King Jeremy says with a smile on his face) No surprise here Flank Badoo Earth Region Africa. Come on up recruits you earned it!

Danielle- (shocked) Guys that's you!

( She pushes Troy and Flank out there seats and up to their feet and they walk up on stage with the other 3 recruits as cheers and claps fill the room as the five top recruits stand on stage)

Jeremy- As you all know only the top five recruits get enrolled into Twin Blade Company. The universe's most elite squad of warriors. (cheers and applause)

( King Jeremy starts handing the twin blades swords to the recruit's. The twin blade sword looks like a two foot rod and when the power switch is activated two blades retract out the ends) ( After King Jeremy hands out the all the twin blade swords he returns to the podium.)

Jeremy- May the rest of you graduates find success and every battle. (Cheers)

(Cuts to Troy, James, Flank and Danielle outside the academy)

Daniele- So what you two win.

Flank- Two tickets to the Universal Fighters Championship

Danielle- What! are you serious (grabs tickets from Flank) that's awesome I really want to see that. You two got to take us.

Troy- (sarcastically) Who else would we take Danielle.

James- She only wants to go because she thinks the Jawran prince is hot

Danielle- No I want to go to see our prince kick the Damon's prince's ass. (Pause) Plus prince Jawran is pretty hot (snickers)

(James Grumbles)

Danielle- Relax honey your still my only man. (wraps around his arm and pulls him near her)

Flank- Well I'm not going.

Troy- What! why not.

Flank- It's just a way to fuel our two planets hate for each other.

Troy- Aww come on Flank we got four tickets to the biggest event of the year and if you don't come (looking at James and Danielle kissing) I'm going to be a third wheel.

Flank- (laughing) Ok ok I'll go, but we take my ride.

(pulls a remote out of his pocket and clicks a button. A four passenger slim vehicle with two side doors, wings on the side and four jets under the vehicle as it hovered down in front of the four people. The two side door open automatically)

Danielle- Nice Flank, when did you get a new Fly Pod?

Flank- A little graduation gift I got for myself.

Troy- What, did you know you where going to graduate top of your class.

Flank- (giggles) Ya maybe.

(The four enter the fly pod Flank starts it up and the hover pod takes off. The fly pod flies over Jawran and as Troy looks out the window he can see the tall buildings and beautiful gardens of Jawran. With Fly pods there are know need for roads so in between all the buildings fresh green grass and beautiful walkways lined in flowers and bushes.) ( Inside Fly pod Flank is in the drivers seat next to him is Troy. James and Danielle are in the back cuddled together kissing)

Troy- So Flank.

Flank- Ya

Troy- Did you really know you where going to graduate top of the class?

(Flank opens up a compartment in the console of the vehicle and pulls out a small pistol. It looks like a regular pistol but with a large clear chamber attached to the top of it and a very long barrel)

Flank- Do you know what this is?

Troy- Ya it's a pistol, but nobodies uses gun warfare anymore it's an obsolete technology because the great tree gave humans thicker skin and therefore we are able to withstand bullets. It's the reason humans switched their choice of weaponry back to the sword. That things got to be like a hundred years old.

Flank- (chuckles) Good, glad to see you paid attention in early Earth warfare class. Yet this pistol is new.

Troy- It is?

Flank- Yes it is my friend. (hold pistol up) It's just a prototype but when you hold the grip of the handle it takes energy from your body and loads it into this little chamber here. (points at the clear chamber attached to the top of the pistol as streams of energy begins to fill the chamber of the gun). Once the chamber is full the gun is ready to be shot but, there is a few problems though.

Troy- What?

Flank- Well the load time is ridiculously long it takes about five minutes for this little thing to load and a larger weapon like a rifle takes about fifteen minutes to load. But King Jawran told me he is secretly training a whole squad of soldiers' to handle these things and this was a little gift from him personally.

Troy- Wait what!? King Jawran gave you that as a gift?

Flank- Ya and when the king hands you a weapon with technology so advance that only 5% of the planet knows about. I was pretty sure I was going to graduate top of the class. He seems to have a lot of faith in me.

Danielle- (calling from back seat) Hey there's the stadium Flank.

Flank- I see it Danielle (leans over to Troy and whispers) by the way this whole conversation lets keep it our little secret ok.

Scene 2 The Battle Between The Two Prince's

(Cuts to a dressing room in the stadium. Facing the wall looking into a mirror is a tall slender Damon. He has pale skin and long black hair running down his back and piercing eyes, his claws are extra sharp and he spoke with much anger and hate in his voice.)

Ren- Finally today is the day Damons get the respect they deserve.

(walking into the room is a young Damon girl black hair running down her back she was the sister of Ren but her eyes weren't piercing they where gentle her nails weren't razor sharp and she was more soft spoken and kind.)

Rio- Working on your victory speech brother? (sits in a chair in the dressing room then picks up a cup of water in front of her and begins to drink) Sounds kinda corny if you ask me.

Ren- (turning around) Well I didn't ask you. Now did I Rio?

Rio- I was just saying Ren don't get all worked up about this fight I'm sure you will do fine.

Ren- Don't get all worked up! This fight will prove that we aren't just a bunch of low lives from the desert planet. Respect for all of Damons is what I'm fighting for.

Rio- Look just go out there spar with him a little, beat him and don't do anything stupid ok brother. (Stands up and begins walks out of room but the turns around) Oh one and one more thing Ren, don't kill him.

(Cuts to the Jawran dressing room King Jawran and his daughter stand in front of King Jawran's son the prince of Jawran)

Jeremy- Son defeat here is out of the question.

Prince- Yes father

Jeremy- (yelling) I'm serious! Don't shame me or your planet when you get out there.

Prince- Father I…

(Jeremy grabs his son by the sides of his face with one hand and pulls him towards him and says softly)

Jeremy- Show him no mercy son because he won't show you any.

(lets the prince go and walks out of the room leaven the prince alone in the room with his sister Princess Aken Jawran)

Akan- Brother do you remember what mom use to say whenever dad went on those rants.

Prince- That he's been through a lot tough times and to not let it get to you.

Akan- Ya

Prince- (gloomy) I sure do miss her lil sis.

Akan- Me to big bro (walks up to him and kisses him on the cheek) Good luck out there.

Prince- Thanks

(Walking out into the open stadium the prince is greeted to cheers and applause his hands our slippery and sweaty and he is very nervous. He looks across the stadium to see Ren the Prince of Damon standing there. Ren is equally as nervous but he tries not to show it on his face. The two princes walk to the center of the ring and meet. Prince Jawran lends his hand out for shake)

Prince Jawran- May we show the strength of our planets with honor

Ren- (rejecting to the hand shake and draws his sword) Draw your sword Prince Jawran

(Ren carried a standard light infantry Damon short sword. It was very light and the swords blade was curved almost like a "J". Prince Jawran then pulled his sword off of his back, it was very large and heavy. Prince Jawran wielded a high tech two handed claymore type sword. He held the sword out in front of him with two hands and with his feet at a wide base this was a very defensive stance. Ren held his sword with his left hand with his right hand and palm raised up in front of him he then squatted down in an attack position. Ren started first with an over head strike Prince Jawran held his sword up above his head and blocked it then gave a straight hard forward kick to the abdomen of Ren. The kick struck the Damon prince hard in the stomach and knocked him back. Ren the furiously rushed the Jawran prince with a horizontal slash but Prince Jawran parried and deflected the blow and then stepped to the side with his foot still out tripping Ren as he fell face forward hard to the ground. Ren got up on his feet and with a cry he charged Jawran again but this time with a swift number of controlled high swings, but just a few quick turns of his massive blade Prince Jawran blocked them all. The two circled each other one time and then Ren leaped forward hard with a very strong over the head swing. Prince Jawran caught it leaning back with his large blade across his chest holding back Ren's blade. This made Ren extremely frustrated and digging deep into his half cat beast blood gave out the mighty rawr of a lion as he swing his free hand across Prince Jawran's face cutting him deeply with his claws. Prince Jawran's head turned upon impact, his face was gashed deeply and the blow from Ren had struck him so hard that it knocked him on his back. The everyone in the stadium gasped and rose to their feet. They where scared and very worried for the prince. Ren stood over the Jawran Prince and looked down at him. That's when he noticed that the Prince wasn't moving or breathing. That's when Ren had noticed he had killed the Prince of Jawran. Ren gasped for breath and jumped back from the body he was shocked to see what he had done. Mumbles began to ruffle around the stadium this is when Ren turned and ran out of the stadium as fast as he could. Running into his dressing room he saw his mother and sister.)

Rio- Brother please don't tell me you. (she paused because she didn't even want to think that her brother had just killed a man) Did you kill him?

(Ren looked at both of them both horrified. His mother grabbed him by the wrist)

Queen Oken- Ren honey, we have to get out of here. (Ren stands still in shock) NOW!

Scene 3 Politics Of Jawran.

( Cut back to the stadium and into the crowd where Troy, Flank, James, and Danielle are sitting they all look very worried as they continue to look at the lifeless body of their prince in the middle of the ring.)

Danielle- Is he okay?

(Three Jawran doctor's run into the ring. Two cart the Jawran prince out the ring while the third picks up a mic. )

Doctor- Umm (stuttering) Everyone the prince is okay. No need to worry just leave and a calm orderly fashion.

Danielle- (yelling) Your lien! That Damon bastard killed him. ( James grabs her and tries to cover her mouth but she continues to scream.) Don't cover for that murdering Damon asshole.

James- Baby, baby shhh!

Man in crowd1- She right we can't let them get away with this

(crowd yells in agreement)

Danielle- They will pay, all of them. They will pay.

(the crowd breaks out into angry cheers) (James lets Danielle go. Flank, Troy and James stare blankly at the angry crowd as the narrator speaks.)

Narrator- After seeing their Prince struck down and killed by the hands of the Damon prince. The Jawran people where irate. They called for blood. They called for war. (Cuts to King Jawran standing at a podium and over looking a gigantic Jawran Army. King Jawran slams his fist and screams out in a rage. ) King Jawran was furious and called the death of his son an act of war. Although the Jawran Elite Subjects of Government did not agree. (shows nine men and women in white and green scholar hoods sitting in the private courthouse of Jawran. It's a beautiful well lit room with columns set up on both sides of the building.) The J.E.S.G. had the governmental check on King Jawran so that he would not have to much power when it came to making decisions.

J.E.S.G. man1- We are thee most powerful planet in the universe why pick a fight with the Damon's who are also quite powerful.

J.E.S.G. Woman1- He's right my king if anyone in the universe can challenge our military power it's the Damon's. To invade them would be foolish we know nothing of the living conditions on Damon and the only thing we really know about there military is that they fight guerrilla style.

King Jeremy- We can study their fighting style by watching the tape in which the Damon prince murdered my son.

J.E.S.G. Man2- Well That's another thing we know little on the Damon solider and absolutely nothing on the full blooded Cat Beast Demons.

J.E.S.G.Man3- Are people are very intimidated by those beast. Damon's are one thing but those beast are real Demons! Their large, hairy, furious beast.

J.E.S.G. Woman2- Exactly fighting the Damon's is one thing but fighting the native Demons that they have allied themselves with is another.

King Jeremy- We haven't had a problem killing demons before.

J.E.S.G.Man4- Look we are all sorry about your son but…

King Jeremy- (snapping back at him) Don't you speak about my son unless you plan to avenge him.

J.E.S.G.Man4- Casualties will be to high and we are not invading. (room goes silent as a cold stare is given to all the J.E.S.G. members from King Jeremy Jawran.)

Narrator- The J.E.S.G. had voted seven to two and vetoed King Jawran's declaration of war. That was until this video was leaked into the Jawran media and aired on The Jawran news.

(Damon reporters follow a well guarded Prince Ren Oken. The camera bounces around as the Damon reporter chases Prince Ren Oken screaming to get his attention.)

Damon Reporter- Prince Oken! Prince Oken!. One word (Prince Oken continue to walk with tunnel vision) Prince Oken what do you say to the Jawran people who say to nothing but a headstrong killer.

(out of frustration Prince Ren Oken turns around and looks directly into the camera)

Prince Ren- The Jawran people are stupid and ignorant. They are just pissed off because now they see how weak they are. They are a weak planet of weak people and I am not sorry for what I did.

Narrator- The video infuriated the Jawran people so much that they protested in the streets. The J.E.S.G. revoted on King Jawran's Declaration to war. It was three to six. With not enough votes to veto, King Jawran's Declaration of war passed. (Cuts to Flank and Troy being prepped for war) It had begun.

Scene 4 Ivory Of the Secret Force.

(Ivory is a young, tall and lean man. He has a peach complexion with green eyes and long brown hair tied into a pony tail. He had a bit of a twang in his voice, an accent that had died out and not very many people still speak with. So he was nicknamed cowboy based off the early American Cowboys. He was laying on the ground with a fully charged up rifle. He was at a shooting range where they trained people to shoot charged weapons. The shooting range is on the outskirts of the Jawran cities to maintain privacy and keep the operation top secret. Ivory shoots his charged rifle at a cardboard cut out of a Damon about fifty feet away but his shot is a little off and strikes the cut out in the shoulder with the shot he had fired. The Jawran Training Officer stands over him and looks at Ivory disappointed. He then says. )

Jawran Trainer- Looks like you just wounded him cowboy.

(Ivory pulls back on a lever placed on the side of his rifle he then grips the handle with his hand firmly and the charge of the weapon begins as a stream of energy fills the clear tube on the top of the rifle. Ivory then responds to the trainer in a very cocky manner.

Ivory- I will finish him on the next shot.

Jawran Trainer- See that's the problem cowboy, there is not going to be a next shot. That weapon takes about fifteen minutes to charge and by then you will be swarmed by the enemy. Damon's don't need swords those claws of there's will be enough to slice through your bone. ( bends down on one knee and says slowly) Don't miss Ivory, don't ever miss.

That's when Ren had noticed he had killed the Prince of Jawran. Ren gasped for breath and jumped back from the body he was shocked to see what he had done. Mumbles began to ruffle around the stadium this is when Ren turned and ran out of the stadium as fast as he could. Running into his dressing room he saw his mother and sister.)

Rio- Brother please don't tell me you. (she paused because she didn't even want to think that her brother had just killed a man) Did you kill him?

(Ren looked at both of them both horrified. His mother grabbed him by the wrist)

Queen Oken- Ren honey, we have to get out of here. (Ren stands still in shock) NOW!

Scene 3 Politics Of Jawran.

( Cut back to the stadium and into the crowd where Troy, Flank, James, and Danielle are sitting they all look very worried as they continue to look at the lifeless body of their prince in the middle of the ring.)

Danielle- Is he okay?

(Three Jawran doctor's run into the ring. Two cart the Jawran prince out the ring while the third picks up a mike. )

Doctor- Umm (stuttering) Everyone the prince is okay. No need to worry just leave and a calm orderly fashion.

Danielle- (yelling) Your lien that Damon bastard killed him. ( James grabs her and tries to cover her mouth but she continues to scream.) Don't cover for that murdering Damon asshole.

James- Baby, baby shhh

Man in crowd1- She right we can't let them get away with this

(crowd yells in agreement)

Danielle- They will pay, all of them. They will pay.

(the crowd breaks out in angry cheers) (James lets Danielle go. Flank, Troy and James stare blankly at the angry crowd as the narrator speaks.)

Narrator- After seeing their Prince struck down and killed by the hands of the Damon prince, The Jawran people where irate. They called for blood. They called for war. (Cuts to King Jawran standing at a podium and over looking a gigantic Jawran Army. King Jawran slams his fist and screams out in a rage. ) King Jawran was furious and called the death of his son an act of war. Although the Jawran Elite Subjects of Government did not agree. (shows nine men and women in white and green scholar hoods sitting in the private courthouse of Jawran. It's a beautiful well lit room with columns set up on both sides of the building.) The J.E.S.G. had the governmental check on King Jawran so that he would not have to much power when it came to making decisions.

J.E.S.G. man1- We are thee most powerful planet in the universe why pick a fight with the Damon's who are also quite powerful.

J.E.S.G. Woman1- He's right my king if anyone in the universe can challenge our military power it's the Damon's. To invade them would be foolish we know nothing of the living conditions on Damon and the only thing we really know about there military is that they fight guerrilla style.

King Jeremy- We can study the video on their prince where he slaughter my son.

J.E.S.G. Man2- Well That's another thing we know little on the Damon solider and absolutely nothing on the full blooded Cat Beast Demons.

J.E.S.G.Man3- Are people are very intimidated by those beast. Damon's are one thing but those beast are real Demons! Their large, hairy, furious beast.

J.E.S.G. Woman2- Exactly fighting the Damon's is one thing but fighting the native Demons that they have allied themselves with is another.

King Jeremy- We haven't had a problem killing demons before.

J.E.S.G. 4- Look we are all sorry about your son but…

King Jeremy- (snapping back at him) Don't you speak about my son unless you plan to avenge him.

J.E.S.G. 4- Casualties will be to high and we are not invading. (room goes silent as a cold stare is given to all the J.E.S.G. members from King Jeremy Jawran.)

Narrator- The J.E.S.G. had voted seven to two and vetoed King Jawran's declaration of war. That was until this video was leaked into the Jawran media and aired on The Jawran news.

(Damon reporters follow a well guarded Prince Ren Oken. The camera bounces around as the Damon report chases Prince Ren Oken Screaming to get his attention.)

Damon Reporter- Prince Oken! Prince Oken!. One word (Prince Oken continue to walk with tunnel vision) Prince Oken what do you say to the Jawran people who say to nothing but a headstrong killer.

(out of frustration Prince Ren Oken turns around and looks directly into the camera)

Prince Ren- The Jawran when people are stupid and ignorant. They are just pissed off because now they see how weak they are. They are a weak planet of weak people and I am not sorry for what I did.

Narrator- The video infuriated the Jawran people so much that they protested in the streets. The J.E.S.G. revoted on the veto to King Jawran's Declaration to war. It was three to six. With not enough votes to veto, King Jawrans Declaration of war passed. (Cuts to Flank and Troy being prepped for war) It had begun.

Scene 4 Ivory Of the Secret Force.

(Ivory is a young, tall and lean man. He has a peach complexion with green eyes and long brown hair tied into a pony tail. He had a bit of a twang in his voice, an accent that had died out and not very many people still speak with. So he was nicknamed cowboy based off the early American Cowboys. He was laying on the ground with a fully charged up rifle. He was at a shooting range where they trained people to shoot charged weapons. The shooting range is on the outskirts of the Jawran cities to maintain privacy and keep the operation top secret. Ivory shoots his charged rifle at a cut out of a Damon about fifty feet away but his shot is a little off and strikes the cut out in the shoulder. The Jawran Training Officer stands over him and looks at Ivory disappointed. He then says. )

Dumen- Looks like you just wounded him.

(Dumen was an older man in his early fifties he had short rough and messy white hair. He always stood tall with a very strong and demanding posture . He was very bony and wrinkled from years of stress. He wore a decorated white and green Jawran general suit)

(Ivory pulls back on a lever placed on the side of the rifle starting the charge he then grips the handle.

Ivory- I will finish him on the next shot.

Dumen- See that's the problem cowboy there is not going to be a next shot. That weapon takes about Fifteen minutes to charge by then you will be swarmed by the enemy and Damon's don't need swords those claws of theirs will be enough to slice through your bone. ( bends down on one knee and says slowly) Don't miss Ivory, don't ever miss.

(sirens go off on the shooting range)

Dumen- (calling out) INSIDE EVERYONE!

(The a small chunk of the ground begun to raise up as the sirens sounded off. The chunk of ground rose completely out of the ground revealing a small underground passage. Everyone flowed into the underground passage.) (Inside the underground passage was a control room with a huge screen that covered then entire wall. In front of the screen was many small computer with scientist working at them. The south side of the underground passage was a living ground for everyone. Dumen steps on a platform in front of the screen.)

Dumen-Yes my King? (The screen comes and King Jeremy Jawran face appears)

King Jeremy- The Declaration of War has passed and we need your charge rifles and cannons.

Dumen- The C.R.s (Charge Rifles) and C.C.s (Charge Cannons) aren't ready yet my king.

King Jeremy- We cannot wait any longer must deploy now

Dumen- My king these are not soldiers. They are just civilians you picked up off the streets, we need more time. If we put them on the battlefield now they will get slaughtered.

King Jeremy- You have three weeks. (screen turns off)

Dumen- That's not enough time. (Dumen takes a deep breath turns to his lead computer tech a tan young lady with black haired bundled in a bun she had deep black eyes covered by her thick glasses.) Hailey turn the war log on.

Hailey- Sire are you sure?

Dumen- Do it Hailey!

Hailey- Yes Sire

(The screen comes back up showing Dumen's war account)

Dumen- General Dumen, earth region Russia C.R.s and C.C.s are ready for combat.

(Recognizing the entry Dumen just gave another screen comes up. It reads "Prepare for war?" Dumen responded)

Dumen- Affirmative. (looking back at Hailey) Hailey open the barrack channels.

Hailey- yes sire.

(she begins typing on the computer) (Cuts to Ivory in his private room he was in just his white boxers searching in the fridge for something to eat. when he heard his channel go off. He ran over to his pants and began to fish around in his pants for his channel. He pulls out his channel which looks like a cell phone with a flip up screen and on the screen he sees Dumen.)

Dumen- Change of plans everyone we will have to cut training short. The J.E.S.G. has passed King Jawran's Declaration of War. We have three weeks to prep for war. So get ready everyone we are going to Damon.

(Ivory looks at the screen in disgust )

Ivory- What!

(Lei enters the room a very skinny young Asian man with short black hair. He is very thin and doesn't seem to have one bit of muscle on his body. Yet strapped to his back like a back pack was a huge Jawran Charge Cannon. The Charge Cannon was basically a large gun barrel with a bipod underneath to help it set up. It had the charge lever on the left side and a site at the front tip of the gun. Lei stumbles into the room exhausted. He slides the straps off the side of his shoulders and sets the cannon down. Then he flops down onto the bottom bunk bed and lays back with his hands over his eyes.

Lei- Why didn't I become a sniper.

Ivory- Because you can't hit the broad side of a Jawran space cruiser.

(Lei sets up to and looks at Ivory)

Lei- Cowboy why are you in your boxers?

Ivory- Cause I'm sexy (he chuckles and rubs his abdominal muscles) and because I was going to hit the hay but now since we got to prep for war. I'm bout to get dressed.

(There a knock at the door Ivory opens the door standing there is Hailey)

Hailey- Ivory how come you in your boxers?

Ivory- What, a man can dress down in his own room.

Hailey- Well what ever you and your roommate want to due on your free time is your business Ivory.

Ivory- Aww girl don't do me that way and why don't you call me cowboy, everyone else does. I hate being called by my last name.

Hailey- (making fun) Well Cowboy here is you mission log, map and list of targets. Study it, learn it, know it. (hands Ivory folder of papers)

(takes them and places aside and then looks at Hailey and says in a very flirty manner)

Ivory- Now come on Hailey you know there's only one thing I want to study, learn and know.

Hailey- Look Ivory.

Ivory- (correcting) Cowboy.

Hailey- Look Cowboy maybe now isn't the time.

Ivory- That's not a no.

Hailey- No, it isn't

(Hailey leaves but Ivory sticks his head out the door and watches her walk down the hallway)

Ivory- Damn that's a sweat biscuit.

Lei- What does that even mean cowboy?

Ivory- Means I'm going to finally get some action around here.

Lei- We will get plenty of action in three weeks.

Ivory- You know that's not what I meant Lei.

Lei- Ya I know what you meant Ivory, but as arrogant of an asshole you have been. I have grown to kind of like you and I don't want you to die. So during prep try to take it a little more seriously ok.

Ivory- I'm gonna be all right Lei my boy. Hell I never miss.

Lei- You missed today.

Ivory- That was once.

Lei- One time is all it takes Ivory, and you horrible at close quarters combat if you miss your dead. Your not going to have the time to recharge your rifle for another shot and what if you have to tangle with a full blooded cat beast demon?

(Ivory picks up his bayonet which is a one foot long extremely sharp blade fitted for his rifle he then connect it to his rifle)

Ivory- Isn't that what this is for? (Lei grumbles and lays back in his bed) Look Lei buddy you just worry bout blowing shit up and I will worry bout me. If it makes you feel any better I will work on close quarter combat more during my off time. I been itchen to use this bayonet anyways.

Lei- (Sitting up) Thank you

Ivory- (sarcastically) Nice to know you care so much about me though

(laughing obnoxiously Ivory watches Lei grumble a little as hey lays back down in bed)

Lei- Asshole (looks over at Ivory) (yelling) And why are you still in your boxers!

Scene 5 The Launch Against Damon

(On board a carrier vessel Flank and Troy sit next to each other with there Twin blades on there back hunched over, They sit along with the rest of there twin blade company. It's very crowded and everyone sits along the wall the vessel has a grey inner interior and its very dark the only light is the red signal light above)

Flank- Nervous Troy?

Troy- Hell ya I am. I mean it's not like I didn't expect to fight but not so early.

Flank- You will do fine I feel the same as you do but life throws us curve balls.

(Troy looks at Flank puzzled as his brown skin complexion shined in the blinking of the red light)

Troy- Flank you almost seem calm.

Flank- Ya I know it's weird ain't it

(James enters the room he is wearing white and green heavy infantry Armor)

James- Hello brother, private Flank.

Troy- hey bro, What are you doing here?

James- I just swung by to see Danielle in the Light Infantry Dock I wanted to say hello to her before the battle. I also decided to swing by and say hello to you to also.

Troy- Thanks bro

(Flank stares at both of them with a blank look at his face)

Flank- You know I wouldn't be able to tell you two apart if James wasn't blond. (they both stare back at him blankly) Yall should have became models not soldiers.

Troy- (laughing) Flank making a joke that's new

(intercom cuts on)

Intercom- Everyone please report to your stations

James- Well I got to go. Stay safe out there guys (James Exits)

( The Twin Blade Company Commander walks into the middle of the room standing tall he says)

Commander- Welcome to Twin Blade Company. You are here because King Jawran has hand picked you as one of the best warriors on Jawran. You handle a weapon that very few ever get to wield. The Jawran Twin blade. The sight of the blades will put courage into the hearts of our allies and fear into the hearts of our enemies. Now the Damon's also have an infantry that is quite feared. The full blooded Cat beast Demons. That is who you will be fighting today. Now stick to all code names while on the battle field. Heavy Infantry "H.Is" Light Infantry "L.I.s" Charge Cannons "C.C.s" and you of the Twin Blade Company T.B.C.s. The H.I.s will land first and engaged the enemy then the L.I.s. We will land at the rear where the cat beast demons are. Strike them hard before they know it and you will be the heroes of this battle. Now to your pods!

( All the T.B.C.s grab there twin blades and begin to file in. Troy and Flank are together as they wait to enter a small four seated pod. Then they here a commander speaking with another T.B.C)

T.B.C. 1- Sir we need one more.

(commander searches the room and finds Flank)

Commander- Flank fall in pod one seventy two.

Flank- Yes sir! ( he turns and looks at Troy) See you when we get down buddy.

(runs over to the pod and enters. Then Troy enters his pod which is pod One seventy three. The pods are round shaped with seat belts pulled down over head. Troy straps himself in with three other T.B.C.s. In the middle of the pod is a small platform with a round screen so all can see. The intercom come on.

Intercom- Launching!

(Troy's head snaps back as the pod is launched out of the ships with the other pods. The pods hurl towards Damon. As they enter Damon's atmosphere Troy looks out the window and looks at the reddish landscape of Damon. That's when Troy's pod gets an incoming message on the pods computer.)

H.I.1- Mayday we have been shot down and are not in positions. It looks like the Damon's have some sort of C.C.s and there shooting pods out of the sky. Do not launch the L.I.s and T.B.C.s I repeat do not launch the L.I.s and T.B.C.s.

T.B.C.2- What the hell! Damon's have C.C.s

T.B.C.3- This could be bad.

(Troy looks out the window and sees the horrific sight of Jawran pods being blown out of the sky. He prays he wont be hit. He prays even harder that his brother wasn't shot down and his best friend Flank will also make it down. That's when Troy sees out his window another pods get chipped by cannon fire knocking it off course and it began to hurl towards them wildly.)

T.B.C.s 2- Shit!

(The other pod crashes into theirs knocking off the alignment of their path and they begin to freefall to the surface. They all scream in terror as they fall until they and the other pod crash onto Damon. Troy is knocked out but he then comes to and notices he's hanging by his seat belt. Troy unbuckles himself and stands up in the pod. He sees two dead T.B.C.s in his pod he also notices one is missing. He then looks up and sees the pod door open. He exits hoping the other T.B.C. wasn't to far away already. As he steps out the pod the dry desert land escape strikes his eyes. Red sand flows through the air. He looks off in the distance and see Damon's charging a group of Jawran's just getting out of there pods. The Damon's have an almost lion like scream as they charge. Their screams the sounds of the cannons and the Jawran pods landing is all Troy could hear.)

T.B.C.s 2- Oh shit your alive!

(Troy looks over and sees the extra man that was missing in his pod)

Troy- Ya

T.B.C.2- I though you where all dead in there. I'm going to see if there's any alive in the pod that crashed into us, come on.

(Troy nodded his head and followed the T.B.C. to the other pod which wasn't far away. Troy opened the door and all where dead but one though he was critically injured and it didn't look as if he could move his arms. Troy and the other T.B.C. helped the man out of the pod)

T.B.C.2- What your name solider?

Matt- Matt Jeter light infantry Earth region Germany.

Troy- We got to get him to the drop point.

T.B.C.2- Are you kidding me the drop point is over run with Damon's

Troy- If we lose the drop point everyone dies

(T.B.C 2 picks up Matt and they head over to the battlefield they end up behind the Jawran army. Once Troy notices Jawran is losing. He takes out his twin blade and charges in.

T.B.C.2- Hey! Where are you going?

(Troy enters the battle and all his training kicks in as he parried an attack and sliced a Damon. He looked at the dead Damon for a second it was the first thing he had ever killed. His trance was broken when he gets attacked again. He holds his sword above his head to block the attack side steps and uses the other side of his sword to stab the Damon in the back. Then Troy searched the crowed and he spotted a full blooded cat beast demons. He seemed to tower over every one else his yellow main stained with blood. His fur stood up and as he stood up right on two feet he seemed so mighty and powerful. A short blade was in his hand and he gripped it tight and gave out a rawr! The Damon's where strong and scary looking but at least they where still half human. Yet The Cat beast Demons where a whole other sight and as fierce as everyone had hyped them up to be. Troy gripped his sword an charged the cat beast demon. The cat beast saw him out the corner of his eye and with one swipe of his arm knocked Troy on his back. Troy looked up at the might cat beast and he gave out a rawr. He rose to his feet. Then pointed the front tip of his sword at the cat beast.

Troy- Shut up! Shut the hell up

(He then swung the left blade of his sword but the cat beast blocked it. So Troy tried to spin of the block and strike him with the right blade. Yet the cat beast also blocked that attack. The cat beast and Troy circled for a minute and then the cat beast gave a hard downward swing of his sword but Troy side stepped spun and sliced the Cat beast in the back. The cat beast fell to his knees and gave out a rawr. Troy stood with his sword out front of him ready. The cat beast then got back up and charged Troy again with a side slice. Troy ducked it and it went over his head as he stepped back. Then the cat beast went for a stab but Troy parried the attack with the left end of his sword once again spun off the attack and with the other side of the sword and stabbed the cat beast in the side. The cat beast gave out another rawr but before Troy could pull out his sword the cat beast back handed him so hard it knocked him airborne and back a couple of feet as he landed on his back. The cat beast pulled the sword out of him and threw it aside. He walked over to Troy and stood over him then stared down and him with an wrathful glare. The cat beast rose his blade to finish Troy but then before the cat beast got a chance Flank came from out the crowd and pounced onto the beast back and began to stab the cat beast numerous times until it feel to the ground dead with Flank on it's back. Flank got off the cat beast back pick up Troy's twin blade and ran over to Troy.)

Flank- You all right

Troy- I think my heart was about to jump out my mouth.

Flank- Well you look fine to me (helping him up) We are falling back. Jawran sent reinforcements out of the way of cannon fire we are to meet up at that new drop point. Hopefully the Damon's will follow us there and then we will have them out number. You got that? (hands Troy his sword back)

Troy- Ya

Flank- Then come on. (yelling) Fall back! (running and waving to the other Jawrans) Fall back!

(All the Jawrans begin to fall back running away from the battle. Sure enough the Damon's pursue them. That's when Troy notices Matt and picks him up)

Matt- What are you doing I will just slow you down?

Troy- Shut up I'm trying to save your ass.

(They continue to retreat as the Damon's are steadily getting closer. )

Flank- (pointing) See that hill. On the other side of it is the other drop point. If we get the Damon's to chase us over top of it. They wont be able to catch their breath before our reinforcements hit em!

(Troy, Flank, and the other Jawran soldiers continue up the hill. Yet the hill is so step some slip and fall. Seeing this Flank runs back to save them. Flank runs down the hill attacking Damons trying to slow them down. Troy turned as he reached the top of the hill with Matt on his back and saw Flank along with the other Jawran stragglers fighting it out at the bottom of the hill.)

Matt- Put me down!

Troy- Huh ?

Matt- I know you want to help him so put me down! Go help him I can make it.

(Troy sits Matt down and he limps down the hill to safety but Troy runs down the other side to help Flank. He sees flank fighting off Damons and there is a mound of bodies of Damons he had killed at his feet. Then another Cat beast Demon came forward. A mighty swing of his claws tears through Flank's chest and Flank's lifeless body falls to the ground. )

Troy- FLANK!

(Troy falls to his knees as he looked on at the Damon army downhill. The Cat beast then lifted Flank's lifeless body above his head and gave out another mighty rawr. As the rest of the Jawran's ran past Troy over the top of the hill he stayed on his knees. He stared at his dead friend as the Cat beast tossed him back on the ground. The Damon army then charged on up the hill but Troy still didn't move the closer they got the more angry Troy got the more he hated them. The Damons where almost to him when he gave out a ear shattering scream. Then he blacked out.

James- Bro you all right?

(Troy woke hours later to the sound of his brothers voice. He was in a hospital bed inside a tent)

Danielle- He's awake!

James- Brother your amazing!

Troy- What are you talking about James

James- Huh you don't even know what you did?

Matt- He doesn't know what your talking about because he blacked out before it happened.

(Troy looks over and saw Matt laying in the bed next to him.)

Troy- Matt

Matt- It was amazing. You closed your eyes, opened your arms and a huge amount of energy came out of your body, killing Damon's Cat Beast all of them. You saved us all.

Troy- No I didn't we had reinforcements coming anyways.

Matt- and none of them had to give their lives because you took out an entire army.

(Troy laid in his bed shocked)

Troy- I…

Matt- Get up Troy your not hurt you probably just passed out from releasing so much energy. There is people out there who want to see you they chant your name.

James- He's right bro people our out side waiting to see you.

(Troy got out of his bed slowly and walks out the tent as soon as he walks out the tent. There is a crowd waiting for him. As Matt said they are chanting his name. When the crowd sees him the crowd erupts into cheers.)

James- You're a hero brother you're the hero of Jawran.

King Jawran's Hero's

Narrator- The war on Damon waged on for over two years. Yet the people of Jawran grew weary of war and began to demand that King Jawran pull out.

(In the J.E.S.G. courtroom King Jawran along with the J.E.S.G. members talk over the war effort)

J.E.S.G.man1- My king maybe it is time to pull out of Damon. We have been very successful in battle and we can keep the lands we have claimed on Damon and try to win the rest of the Damons over with our culture.

King Jawran- (with disgust) You J.E.S.G.s are all idiots. You really think demons are going to be persuaded with culture. The cold steel of a sword is all they understand.

J.E.S.G. man2- That may be true for the Demons but remember most of the people on the planet are Damons or half Demons. They still have human in them they can still be saved.

King Jawran- (yelling) THEY DON'T WANT TO BE SAVED! THEY WANT TO KILL, US ALL OF US! THEY WANT TO KILL YOU, (Pointing a J.E.S.G. members) AND YOU, AND YOU!

J.E.S.G woman1- (remaining calm) Well unless you find a way to keep the citizen in favor of this war we are going to have to vote for a withdraw from Damon.

King Jawran- Aw yes. Actually I have just that.

( King Jeremy Jawran reaches inside of his coat and pulls out two folders with pictures paperclip to them)

King Jawran- Do you know who these two are?

Ivory's Profile

(cuts to Ivory riding a high-tech bike. He is laid on his stomach with his head up and goggles to keep the desert dirt out of his eyes. The bike is white and green with a small wheel in the back and a larger wheel in the back. Ivory stops the bike at a ruined Damon city. It had taken a lot of cannon fire from the Jawran C.C.s. Ivory is wearing a heavy brown jacket to blend in with the desert sand. Though he has it open to show off his stomach muscles. He also has a small green earpiece He turns to his bike and grabs the silver metal suit case he had on the back of it and runs into the city. He sees fire escape like stairs on the side of the building and begins to climb it when his earpiece rings in.

Hailey's voice- Are you in position yet.

Ivory- Almost gorgeous

(Dumen rings in)

Duman's voice - Ivory please refrain from calling the objective coordinator gorgeous, pretty, beautiful, or cute

(cuts to the mission room where Dumen stands in front of a large screen. The room is dark and only the light of the many other computers is what keeps the room lit. Right next to where Dumen is standing sits Hailey at her computer she cracks a small smile at the comment Ivory just made.)

Ivory's voice - What about dead sexy?

Duman- (with annoyance in his voice) Especially not dead sexy.

Ivory voice- (giggles) all right then.

(cuts back to Ivory he is now on the roof)

Duman's voice - Could you give us visual?

(Ivory taps a button on his earpiece. Cuts back to mission room the screen comes up in front of Duman they can now see what Ivory sees.)

Ivory's voice - sending visual

(cuts back to Ivory on roof he kneels down and opens up his silver suitcase and in it is the parts to a fully charged charge rifle. Ivory took the parts of the C.R. out of the suitcase and began to put the C.R. together. He connected the butt to the handle then that to the barrel then he took the full chamber of his energy and connected it to the top of the gun then he connected the scope and bayonet on the end of the barrel.

Ivory- (nervously) ok ready

(He sits with his back to the small ledge on the roof and holding up his rifle. Then he turns and mounts his rifle on the ledge of the roof and looks down his scope. He sees through his scope his target a Damon General giving his troops battle plans. Ivory then begins to breath deeply and quickly as his breaths get more and more shallow he begins to shake and he falls back and drops his gun. Cut to mission room)

Duman- (angrily) Aww not again!

Hailey- Ivory come in. Ivory!

(cuts back to Ivory on the roof hes sitting laying back with his two arms holding hims up)

Hailey's voice- Ivory calm down! Ivory! Ivory come in, Ivory!

(Ivory sits back up and rubs his eyes he then says with a loss of breath)

Ivory- That sweet voice of yours always calms me down.

Hailey's voice- Glad that you alrgiht.

Duman- Now hurry and take the damn shot!

(Ivory picks back up his rifle and mounts it back on the ledge like before he looks through the scope and aims but once again he starts to breath hard and deep but this time he has comfort through his earpiece)

Hailey's voice- Calm down Ivory your not going to miss, (pause) you never miss.

(Ivory shoots)

Duman- Target hit

(Ivory rubs his shoulder)

Ivory- Damn that thing kicks.

Hailey's voice- You did it Ivory, Like always

Duman's voice- (upset) Now get your ass back to base.

Ivory- Roger

( Ivory picks up his suitcase and in one hand and rifle in the other. He begins to work his way down the building. When he reaches the bottom he begins to here sirens go off. Ivory now knew that the enemy was aware of his presence. He began to sprint north towards the postion where his bike is. He is running through run down damon city but then he stops in his tracks next to warehouse. He looks around the corner and he sees his bike and right next to it he sees the Damon Patorl Guard who had found it.)

Ivory- Aww Damnit

Hailey- What is it Ivory?

Ivory- It looks like the local patrol have found my bike.

Dumen- Well then take him out.

(Ivory stops looking around the corner and kneels down)

Ivory- I can't my rifle isn't charged

Dumen- Isn't that what you have a bayonet for take him down quickly before he even notices you.

Damon Patrol- (calling) Is someone there

Ivory- Shit he heard me!

( The Damon patrol draws his sword and begins to walk slowly over towards the wall where Ivory was hiding. Ivory knew he was horrible at close quarters combat so he had to think of something quick to refrian from engaging in combat)

Ivory- Don't come any closer I'm scared!

Damon Patrol- your scared why

Ivory- You didn't hear that loud noise and then the general died

(Ivory was trying to stall to give his rifle more time to charge he held it very tightly and close to himself)

Ivory- (whispering to himself) Come on almost there just a little longer

Damon Patrol- Oh no need to be to be scared civilian I'm a solider. I will protect you. I will take you back to the barracks and you can wait for someone to protect you.

Ivory- If your not going to hurt me then put down your sword.

Damon Patrol- (chuckling) Ok ok here

( He drops his sword and as soon as Ivory heard the clang of the sword hit the ground. He came out from behind the wall with his rifle raised and pointed at the patrols.)

Ivory- Don't move

Damon Patrol- Your no Damon!

(Ivory kicks the Damon's sword away)

Ivory- On your knees hands up (the damon does as he says and gives out a small growl ) If your growl I will stab you right in the neck.

(The Damon leaned forward on all fours and looked up at Ivory his human skin was white as rice. He demon tail was down between his legs. He saw that the Damon was scared. Ivory always seeing himself as a good person has never had anyone scared of him.)

Ivory- Let me ask you something. Do you consider yourself human or demon?

Damon patrol- What!?

Ivory- Answer the question.

Damon Patrol- What do you want me to say? I have a tail, fangs, and claws so I'm not human. Yet I have hair and skin not fur so I'm not a Demon. I am a Damon and yes I do allign myself with the cat beast Demons for they are our natives and friends.

Ivory- Why do you fight with them?

Damon Patrol- Why not because you say it's wrong.

( Ivory looks down at his rifle and sees it is fully charged now he then aims the muzzle at the head of the Damon. The Damon lowers his head and begins to sob.)

Ivory- Your have been put in this situation because you willing to help a complete stranger. Someone you didn't even know. I can't kill a man (pause) I mean a Damon, (pauses again) I can't kill anyone with such kindness.

( Ivory withdraws his weapon and then grabs his suitcase and runs to his bike. He mounts it and drives away.)

Narrator- As the Damon watched Ivory drive off into the sunset of the foggy desert. He thinks to himself I can't believe a Jawran showed me mercy.

(Hours later Ivory returned back at the mission room. As soon as the door open and he entered Dumen stood across from him.)

Duman- What the hell was that?

Ivory- I found no reason to fire another shot and expose myself.

Duman- That's bullshit and you know it Ivory you let an enemy soilder go free. Look your good Ivory your very good but your arrogant, cocky, lazy, and every time you are about take a shot you freeze up and have a damn panic attack.

Hailey- But sir he's are most successful shooter yet over 200 missions and not one miss all kills

Duman- (snapping) Don't defend him Hailey! You don't think I don't know whats going on between you two. Everyone knows neither of you hide it well. (He starts to talk to Ivory again) I put in a request to have you shipped out of Damon and back to Jawran.)

Ivory - Sir!

Duman- That is all pack your things

(Cuts to Ivory in his room packing up. Hailey enters. )

Hailey- I'm sorry that…

Ivory- Don't be sorry Hailey! It's my fault for acaully feeling sorry for that Damon piece of shit.

Hailey- Know it was the right thing to do.

Ivory- Ya well it just got me booted to guard duty on Jawran.

Hailey- Ivory I did some research on my family heritage you know what my Earth region is right?

Ivory- What is this a test?

Hailey- No

Ivory- It's Egypt

Hailey- Yes but I read up on my familt history and saw I had family in America like you as well.

Ivory- Does this have a point

Hailey- Yes just listen Ivory! My family migrated to western Africa and then was captured and sold to the Americans as slaves. After the slaves where freed they where very much frowned upon just because the looked different then the natives just because there skin was a little darker.

Ivory- Aww Hailey come on hating someone because there skin is a little darker then yours is stupid, but this is different.

Hailey- Is it Ivory! Is it really any different. We hate Damons because they look like demons but there not they are still half human.

Ivory- Yes but there also half Demon.

Hailey- There both is that really so wrong!

Ivory- YES IT IS!

Hailey- You realize if you and I would have lived back in those times where skin tone mattered people would have killed us for loving each other.

Ivory- Hailey I… (reaches for her)

Hailey- Don't touch me because your know different then those ignorant people where all those years ago

(Hailey storms out the room. Ivory sighs and continues to pack.) (Cuts to Ivory coming of a Jawran military carrier ship. He was back on Jawran and he was standing in front of Jawran Fortress. It was the castle where the Royal Family of Jawran lived.)

Jawran guard- Sergant Ivory I presume.

(Ivory notices the guard)

Ivory- Yes sirey that me.

Jawran guard- The King request your audience please follow me.

Ivory- Really well isn't that something. Ok lead me honk dog

Jawran guard- Umm yes of course.

(Ivory follows the guard into the castle. The guard leads him to a door it was massive in size. The guard turns to Ivory and says)

Jawran Guard- Please be respectful the king is in a meeting with the J.E.S.G.

(The guard opens the door and sees King Jeremy Jawran having a meeting with the J.E.S.G.)

( King Jeremy Jawran reaches inside of his coat and pulls out two folders with pictures paperclip to them)

King Jawran- Do you know who these two are? They are Sergant Ivory and Troy the man who saved all the people when we first landed on Damon. (King Jawran looks over and seeing Ivory at the doorway.) Aww yes Ivory is it?

Ivory- Yes your majesty

King Jawran- Come here.

(Ivory walks over towards the King and King Jawran raps his arm around Ivory.)

King Jawran- Over 200 missions on Damon and not one miss all clean kills. His rifle has saved many lives. What we need to do is let our people know about fighters like Ivory here and Troy. They are heros of Jawran and that's what people want. Someone to praise and look up to heros.

(King Jawran looks over and sees Troy)

King Jawran- Aww look what we have here the other hero. Come here son.

(Troy walks forward and King Jawran raps his other arm around Troy and as he stood with Troy under on arm and Ivory under the other he finished his speech.)

King Jawran- These are my heros and there your heros people well love them want to know about them. They will be celeberties. They will be powerful. They will be the reason we win this war. No take of picture of us so we have something to show the media.

(showing Ivory and Troy on many different television programs)

Narrator- So King Jawran began to get more support for his war by showing off Ivory and Troy. They both told there stories of their experiences on the battlefiled. They where loved, they where worshiped. They had become famous across the galaxy and they had become thee most famous two on Jawran. Troy the killer of a thosand Damons and Ivory the man that never missed.





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