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Dysphoria Part 1

Script By: N1NJA
Science fiction



A young man travels back in time to save the life of his girlfriend.


Submitted:May 15, 2012    Reads: 14    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


INT.Bedroom.Early Morning

Our main character Kaleb,(aged 17) is lying down on a futon in a dark room.

There is an alarm clock in the room, it reads 4:28.

A loud crash will suddenly occur,shaking the room like crazy.

Kaleb will wake up and sit up on his futon facing directly ahead of him, he will see a hooded figure (hooded figure will have a shiny outline on him) standing in front of him.

(Music "eerie" plays) Kaleb is smiling in a creepy manner.

Hooded figure

Hello Kaleb, everything is going to work out, I promise.

Kaleb smiles, then rolls over to fall asleep. (music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.BEDroom.morning

The alarm clock will change from 7:29 to 7:30, the alarm will go off at 7:30.

Kaleb wakes up,turns off the alarm clock, gets off of his futon, turns on the light and walks to his closet.

He will grab a black t-shirt and blue jeans from his closet and walk into the bathroom that is located right beside his room.

Cut to:

INT.Bathroom.Morning

He will close the bathroom door once he is inside the bathroom.

He sets the clothes he just took from his closet and sets them on the back part of the toilet seat.

Kaleb then takes his shirt and throws it on the ground

INT.Shower.Morning

Kaleb will step into the shower

CUT TO:

INT.Bathroom.MORNING

Kaleb has changed clothes now and is staring into the mirror, he takes a deep breath, then exits the bathroom.

Once out of the house, he walks towards his car and drives off to school.

CUT TO:

INT.Car.Morning

Kaleb is driving down the highway to school.

FADE TO black:

Ext.high school building.morning

Kaleb is standing outside of a building. (Music "Sad Hero's Overture" plays)

The building has letters on the top that spell out Vian High School.

Kaleb walks inside the building.

Kaleb walks straight through the hallway. (Music stops)

fade to black:

INT.MRS OLIVER's room.day

Kaleb is sitting at a table in the back corner of the classroom, there is a computer in front of him. He will be sitting there quietly, with a clock ticking in the background, when all of a sudden the Hooded Figure talks to him.

VOICE

You want help don't you? ("Epic Suspense" music plays)

Voice

See if you can go to the bathroom.

Kaleb gets up from his seat, he approaches Mrs. Oliver's desk.

Kaleb

Can I go to the bathroom?

MRS. OLIVER

Sure

Kaleb walks out of the classroom.

INT.cafeteria.day

He walks through the cafeteria hallway. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.school bathroom.day

Kaleb is standing in a bathroom, he is pacing around the area.

Kaleb

Ok, I'm here.

There will be a silence for about 3 seconds, Kaleb will decide to try and leave the bathroom, when he is about to reach the door, and the room will shake.

The HOODED FIGURE is now behind Kaleb.

HOODED FIGURE

Turn around. (Music "Darkness" plays)

Kaleb turns around to face the HOODED FIGURE.

HOODED FIGURE

I'm here to help you.

Kaleb

How are you going to do that?

HOODED FIGURE

With this...

HOODED FIGURE takes a couple of steps backwards

Hooded Figure

Have you ever seen a portal?

Kaleb is smiling in an uncomfortable manner

KALEB

(somber) No

There is now a glowing blue orb in the air beside Hooded Figure, he says it is a portal.

HOODED FIGURE

Step into the portal, it can't hurt you.

Hooded Figure disappears.

Kaleb walks into the portal. (music stops)

Fade to black:

EXT.middle school campus.day

Kaleb is now standing on a large piece of concrete, which used to be a basketball court, he looks around and sees Sarah (his girlfriend who was killed in a car crash just a few days ago) in the distance. (Music "Emotional Score" plays)

Kaleb is panicking, shaking his head in disbelief as he is walking towards Sarah

VOICE

She won't remember you, there's a letter in your pocket, give it to her

KALEB

(scared) Whoa, whoa, whoa, why is she even here?

HOODED FIGURE

That's not important.

KALEB

I'd say it's pretty important, she died in a car crash last week. (angry)

Kaleb pulls out the letter from his pocket, and walks toward Sarah.

(Kaleb will sound scared on every line of his dialogue)

KALEB

Hey.

Sarah

Hey.

Sarah

I overheard you, who died in a car wreck?

Kaleb

An old friend.

Sarah

Oh, I'm sorry.

Kaleb

I haven't seen you in a while.

Sarah

Um, I don't think I know you.

Kaleb

(nervous)

Well, maybe this will explain things

Kaleb hands Sarah the letter.

Sarah

What's this?

Kaleb

Check it out.

Sarah opens the letter, she is looking at it as if she is reading it.

Show the letter

Fade to black

Sarah is reading the letter, she is almost done

Sarah folds up the letter.

Sarah

That's so sweet...

The voice will talk to Kaleb again.

Voice

It worked.

Kaleb

What?!

The area starts to slowly disappear around Kaleb and Sarah.

VOICE

Here's your second chance.

The area now completely disappears. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.MRS OLIVER'S ROOM.DAY

Kaleb is dazed in his chair, he has a severe headache, he is hunched over the desk with his hands on his temples.

KALEB

Second chance? (whisper)

MRS. OLIVER

Why are you still here Kaleb, the bell rang about 10 minutes ago.

KALEB

Oh did it? I'm sorry.

Kaleb gets up and walks out of the classroom.

EXt.Hs campus.day

Sarah is standing by the doorway waiting on Kaleb.

Kaleb has a smile on his face.

(Music "A house never a Home" plays) Kaleb and Sarah begin to walk away from the classroom together.

INT.Bedroom.Early Morning

Our main character Kaleb,(aged 17) is lying down on a futon in a dark room.

There is an alarm clock in the room, it reads 4:28.

A loud crash will suddenly occur,shaking the room like crazy.

Kaleb will wake up and sit up on his futon facing directly ahead of him, he will see a hooded figure (hooded figure will have a shiny outline on him) standing in front of him.

(Music "eerie" plays) Kaleb is smiling in a creepy manner.

Hooded figure

Hello Kaleb, everything is going to work out, I promise.

Kaleb smiles, then rolls over to fall asleep. (music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.BEDroom.morning

The alarm clock will change from 7:29 to 7:30, the alarm will go off at 7:30.

Kaleb wakes up,turns off the alarm clock, gets off of his futon, turns on the light and walks to his closet.

He will grab a black t-shirt and blue jeans from his closet and walk into the bathroom that is located right beside his room.

Cut to:

INT.Bathroom.Morning

He will close the bathroom door once he is inside the bathroom.

He sets the clothes he just took from his closet and sets them on the back part of the toilet seat.

Kaleb then takes his shirt and throws it on the ground

INT.Shower.Morning

Kaleb will step into the shower

CUT TO:

INT.Bathroom.MORNING

Kaleb has changed clothes now and is staring into the mirror, he takes a deep breath, then exits the bathroom.

Once out of the house, he walks towards his car and drives off to school.

CUT TO:

INT.Car.Morning

Kaleb is driving down the highway to school.

FADE TO black:

Ext.high school building.morning

Kaleb is standing outside of a building. (Music "Sad Hero's Overture" plays)

The building has letters on the top that spell out Vian High School.

Kaleb walks inside the building.

Kaleb walks straight through the hallway. (Music stops)

fade to black:

INT.MRS OLIVER's room.day

Kaleb is sitting at a table in the back corner of the classroom, there is a computer in front of him. He will be sitting there quietly, with a clock ticking in the background, when all of a sudden the Hooded Figure talks to him.

VOICE

You want help don't you? ("Epic Suspense" music plays)

Voice

See if you can go to the bathroom.

Kaleb gets up from his seat, he approaches Mrs. Oliver's desk.

Kaleb

Can I go to the bathroom?

MRS. OLIVER

Sure

Kaleb walks out of the classroom.

INT.cafeteria.day

He walks through the cafeteria hallway. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.school bathroom.day

Kaleb is standing in a bathroom, he is pacing around the area.

Kaleb

Ok, I'm here.

There will be a silence for about 3 seconds, Kaleb will decide to try and leave the bathroom, when he is about to reach the door, and the room will shake.

The HOODED FIGURE is now behind Kaleb.

HOODED FIGURE

Turn around. (Music "Darkness" plays)

Kaleb turns around to face the HOODED FIGURE.

HOODED FIGURE

I'm here to help you.

Kaleb

How are you going to do that?

HOODED FIGURE

With this...

HOODED FIGURE takes a couple of steps backwards

Hooded Figure

Have you ever seen a portal?

Kaleb is smiling in an uncomfortable manner

KALEB

(somber) No

There is now a glowing blue orb in the air beside Hooded Figure, he says it is a portal.

HOODED FIGURE

Step into the portal, it can't hurt you.

Hooded Figure disappears.

Kaleb walks into the portal. (music stops)

Fade to black:

EXT.middle school campus.day

Kaleb is now standing on a large piece of concrete, which used to be a basketball court, he looks around and sees Sarah (his girlfriend who was killed in a car crash just a few days ago) in the distance. (Music "Emotional Score" plays)

Kaleb is panicking, shaking his head in disbelief as he is walking towards Sarah

VOICE

She won't remember you, there's a letter in your pocket, give it to her

KALEB

(scared) Whoa, whoa, whoa, why is she even here?

HOODED FIGURE

That's not important.

KALEB

I'd say it's pretty important, she died in a car crash last week. (angry)

Kaleb pulls out the letter from his pocket, and walks toward Sarah.

(Kaleb will sound scared on every line of his dialogue)

KALEB

Hey.

Sarah

Hey.

Sarah

I overheard you, who died in a car wreck?

Kaleb

An old friend.

Sarah

Oh, I'm sorry.

Kaleb

I haven't seen you in a while.

Sarah

Um, I don't think I know you.

Kaleb

(nervous)

Well, maybe this will explain things

Kaleb hands Sarah the letter.

Sarah

What's this?

Kaleb

Check it out.

Sarah opens the letter, she is looking at it as if she is reading it.

Show the letter

Fade to black

Sarah is reading the letter, she is almost done

Sarah folds up the letter.

Sarah

That's so sweet...

The voice will talk to Kaleb again.

Voice

It worked.

Kaleb

What?!

The area starts to slowly disappear around Kaleb and Sarah.

VOICE

Here's your second chance.

The area now completely disappears. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.MRS OLIVER'S ROOM.DAY

Kaleb is dazed in his chair, he has a severe headache, he is hunched over the desk with his hands on his temples.

KALEB

Second chance? (whisper)

MRS. OLIVER

Why are you still here Kaleb, the bell rang about 10 minutes ago.

KALEB

Oh did it? I'm sorry.

Kaleb gets up and walks out of the classroom.

EXt.Hs campus.day

Sarah is standing by the doorway waiting on Kaleb.

Kaleb has a smile on his face.

(Music "A house never a Home" plays) Kaleb and Sarah begin to walk away from the classroom together.

INT.Bedroom.Early Morning

Our main character Kaleb,(aged 17) is lying down on a futon in a dark room.

There is an alarm clock in the room, it reads 4:28.

A loud crash will suddenly occur,shaking the room like crazy.

Kaleb will wake up and sit up on his futon facing directly ahead of him, he will see a hooded figure (hooded figure will have a shiny outline on him) standing in front of him.

(Music "eerie" plays) Kaleb is smiling in a creepy manner.

Hooded figure

Hello Kaleb, everything is going to work out, I promise.

Kaleb smiles, then rolls over to fall asleep. (music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.BEDroom.morning

The alarm clock will change from 7:29 to 7:30, the alarm will go off at 7:30.

Kaleb wakes up,turns off the alarm clock, gets off of his futon, turns on the light and walks to his closet.

He will grab a black t-shirt and blue jeans from his closet and walk into the bathroom that is located right beside his room.

Cut to:

INT.Bathroom.Morning

He will close the bathroom door once he is inside the bathroom.

He sets the clothes he just took from his closet and sets them on the back part of the toilet seat.

Kaleb then takes his shirt and throws it on the ground

INT.Shower.Morning

Kaleb will step into the shower

CUT TO:

INT.Bathroom.MORNING

Kaleb has changed clothes now and is staring into the mirror, he takes a deep breath, then exits the bathroom.

Once out of the house, he walks towards his car and drives off to school.

CUT TO:

INT.Car.Morning

Kaleb is driving down the highway to school.

FADE TO black:

Ext.high school building.morning

Kaleb is standing outside of a building. (Music "Sad Hero's Overture" plays)

The building has letters on the top that spell out Vian High School.

Kaleb walks inside the building.

Kaleb walks straight through the hallway. (Music stops)

fade to black:

INT.MRS OLIVER's room.day

Kaleb is sitting at a table in the back corner of the classroom, there is a computer in front of him. He will be sitting there quietly, with a clock ticking in the background, when all of a sudden the Hooded Figure talks to him.

VOICE

You want help don't you? ("Epic Suspense" music plays)

Voice

See if you can go to the bathroom.

Kaleb gets up from his seat, he approaches Mrs. Oliver's desk.

Kaleb

Can I go to the bathroom?

MRS. OLIVER

Sure

Kaleb walks out of the classroom.

INT.cafeteria.day

He walks through the cafeteria hallway. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.school bathroom.day

Kaleb is standing in a bathroom, he is pacing around the area.

Kaleb

Ok, I'm here.

There will be a silence for about 3 seconds, Kaleb will decide to try and leave the bathroom, when he is about to reach the door, and the room will shake.

The HOODED FIGURE is now behind Kaleb.

HOODED FIGURE

Turn around. (Music "Darkness" plays)

Kaleb turns around to face the HOODED FIGURE.

HOODED FIGURE

I'm here to help you.

Kaleb

How are you going to do that?

HOODED FIGURE

With this...

HOODED FIGURE takes a couple of steps backwards

Hooded Figure

Have you ever seen a portal?

Kaleb is smiling in an uncomfortable manner

KALEB

(somber) No

There is now a glowing blue orb in the air beside Hooded Figure, he says it is a portal.

HOODED FIGURE

Step into the portal, it can't hurt you.

Hooded Figure disappears.

Kaleb walks into the portal. (music stops)

Fade to black:

EXT.middle school campus.day

Kaleb is now standing on a large piece of concrete, which used to be a basketball court, he looks around and sees Sarah (his girlfriend who was killed in a car crash just a few days ago) in the distance. (Music "Emotional Score" plays)

Kaleb is panicking, shaking his head in disbelief as he is walking towards Sarah

VOICE

She won't remember you, there's a letter in your pocket, give it to her

KALEB

(scared) Whoa, whoa, whoa, why is she even here?

HOODED FIGURE

That's not important.

KALEB

I'd say it's pretty important, she died in a car crash last week. (angry)

Kaleb pulls out the letter from his pocket, and walks toward Sarah.

(Kaleb will sound scared on every line of his dialogue)

KALEB

Hey.

Sarah

Hey.

Sarah

I overheard you, who died in a car wreck?

Kaleb

An old friend.

Sarah

Oh, I'm sorry.

Kaleb

I haven't seen you in a while.

Sarah

Um, I don't think I know you.

Kaleb

(nervous)

Well, maybe this will explain things

Kaleb hands Sarah the letter.

Sarah

What's this?

Kaleb

Check it out.

Sarah opens the letter, she is looking at it as if she is reading it.

Show the letter

Fade to black

Sarah is reading the letter, she is almost done

Sarah folds up the letter.

Sarah

That's so sweet...

The voice will talk to Kaleb again.

Voice

It worked.

Kaleb

What?!

The area starts to slowly disappear around Kaleb and Sarah.

VOICE

Here's your second chance.

The area now completely disappears. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.MRS OLIVER'S ROOM.DAY

Kaleb is dazed in his chair, he has a severe headache, he is hunched over the desk with his hands on his temples.

KALEB

Second chance? (whisper)

MRS. OLIVER

Why are you still here Kaleb, the bell rang about 10 minutes ago.

KALEB

Oh did it? I'm sorry.

Kaleb gets up and walks out of the classroom.

EXt.Hs campus.day

Sarah is standing by the doorway waiting on Kaleb.

Kaleb has a smile on his face.

(Music "A house never a Home" plays) Kaleb and Sarah begin to walk away from the classroom together.

INT.Bedroom.Early Morning

Our main character Kaleb,(aged 17) is lying down on a futon in a dark room.

There is an alarm clock in the room, it reads 4:28.

A loud crash will suddenly occur,shaking the room like crazy.

Kaleb will wake up and sit up on his futon facing directly ahead of him, he will see a hooded figure (hooded figure will have a shiny outline on him) standing in front of him.

(Music "eerie" plays) Kaleb is smiling in a creepy manner.

Hooded figure

Hello Kaleb, everything is going to work out, I promise.

Kaleb smiles, then rolls over to fall asleep. (music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.BEDroom.morning

The alarm clock will change from 7:29 to 7:30, the alarm will go off at 7:30.

Kaleb wakes up,turns off the alarm clock, gets off of his futon, turns on the light and walks to his closet.

He will grab a black t-shirt and blue jeans from his closet and walk into the bathroom that is located right beside his room.

Cut to:

INT.Bathroom.Morning

He will close the bathroom door once he is inside the bathroom.

He sets the clothes he just took from his closet and sets them on the back part of the toilet seat.

Kaleb then takes his shirt and throws it on the ground

INT.Shower.Morning

Kaleb will step into the shower

CUT TO:

INT.Bathroom.MORNING

Kaleb has changed clothes now and is staring into the mirror, he takes a deep breath, then exits the bathroom.

Once out of the house, he walks towards his car and drives off to school.

CUT TO:

INT.Car.Morning

Kaleb is driving down the highway to school.

FADE TO black:

Ext.high school building.morning

Kaleb is standing outside of a building. (Music "Sad Hero's Overture" plays)

The building has letters on the top that spell out Vian High School.

Kaleb walks inside the building.

Kaleb walks straight through the hallway. (Music stops)

fade to black:

INT.MRS OLIVER's room.day

Kaleb is sitting at a table in the back corner of the classroom, there is a computer in front of him. He will be sitting there quietly, with a clock ticking in the background, when all of a sudden the Hooded Figure talks to him.

VOICE

You want help don't you? ("Epic Suspense" music plays)

Voice

See if you can go to the bathroom.

Kaleb gets up from his seat, he approaches Mrs. Oliver's desk.

Kaleb

Can I go to the bathroom?

MRS. OLIVER

Sure

Kaleb walks out of the classroom.

INT.cafeteria.day

He walks through the cafeteria hallway. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.school bathroom.day

Kaleb is standing in a bathroom, he is pacing around the area.

Kaleb

Ok, I'm here.

There will be a silence for about 3 seconds, Kaleb will decide to try and leave the bathroom, when he is about to reach the door, and the room will shake.

The HOODED FIGURE is now behind Kaleb.

HOODED FIGURE

Turn around. (Music "Darkness" plays)

Kaleb turns around to face the HOODED FIGURE.

HOODED FIGURE

I'm here to help you.

Kaleb

How are you going to do that?

HOODED FIGURE

With this...

HOODED FIGURE takes a couple of steps backwards

Hooded Figure

Have you ever seen a portal?

Kaleb is smiling in an uncomfortable manner

KALEB

(somber) No

There is now a glowing blue orb in the air beside Hooded Figure, he says it is a portal.

HOODED FIGURE

Step into the portal, it can't hurt you.

Hooded Figure disappears.

Kaleb walks into the portal. (music stops)

Fade to black:

EXT.middle school campus.day

Kaleb is now standing on a large piece of concrete, which used to be a basketball court, he looks around and sees Sarah (his girlfriend who was killed in a car crash just a few days ago) in the distance. (Music "Emotional Score" plays)

Kaleb is panicking, shaking his head in disbelief as he is walking towards Sarah

VOICE

She won't remember you, there's a letter in your pocket, give it to her

KALEB

(scared) Whoa, whoa, whoa, why is she even here?

HOODED FIGURE

That's not important.

KALEB

I'd say it's pretty important, she died in a car crash last week. (angry)

Kaleb pulls out the letter from his pocket, and walks toward Sarah.

(Kaleb will sound scared on every line of his dialogue)

KALEB

Hey.

Sarah

Hey.

Sarah

I overheard you, who died in a car wreck?

Kaleb

An old friend.

Sarah

Oh, I'm sorry.

Kaleb

I haven't seen you in a while.

Sarah

Um, I don't think I know you.

Kaleb

(nervous)

Well, maybe this will explain things

Kaleb hands Sarah the letter.

Sarah

What's this?

Kaleb

Check it out.

Sarah opens the letter, she is looking at it as if she is reading it.

Show the letter

Fade to black

Sarah is reading the letter, she is almost done

Sarah folds up the letter.

Sarah

That's so sweet...

The voice will talk to Kaleb again.

Voice

It worked.

Kaleb

What?!

The area starts to slowly disappear around Kaleb and Sarah.

VOICE

Here's your second chance.

The area now completely disappears. (Music stops)

FADE TO BLACK:

INT.MRS OLIVER'S ROOM.DAY

Kaleb is dazed in his chair, he has a severe headache, he is hunched over the desk with his hands on his temples.

KALEB

Second chance? (whisper)

MRS. OLIVER

Why are you still here Kaleb, the bell rang about 10 minutes ago.

KALEB

Oh did it? I'm sorry.

Kaleb gets up and walks out of the classroom.

EXt.Hs campus.day

Sarah is standing by the doorway waiting on Kaleb.

Kaleb has a smile on his face.

(Music "A house never a Home" plays) Kaleb and Sarah begin to walk away from the classroom together.





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