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Submitted: Mar 19, 2007    Reads: 657    Comments: 12    Likes: 3   


 

               The zookeeper was showing the visitor through the zoo and animal laboratory.

      ''Our budget is so small, that we can't afford to re-create the most known exstinct species, so, therefore, we re-create only the highly intelligent of the lot, the ones that were purposely exterminated.''

As the zookeeper ran through his daily banter, the visitor glanced from left to right, gazing in awe at the mutant creatures before her; a gorilla with the head of a chimpanzee, a dog with the face of a cat, a cobra with the body of a komodo dragon.  Definitely failed experiments, indeed.

           ''Tell me,'' the visitor asked, ''Where do you aquire all of the data used to ''re-create?'' It doesn't seem as though the ''experiments'' have been very successful.''

''Mostly from skeletons and skins from the ancient museum,'' he said.

''Very interesting,'' she said, lighting a cigarette.

''Yes, very,'' said the zookeeper proudly. ''We've also succeeded in aquiring excavated books and films we were able to restore.''

   ''Very, very interesting,'' she said with a note of skepticism in her voice, stopping at the last cage. It was filthy, reeking of excrement and urine, body odor. It's occupant, skeletal and sickly, sat naked in a corner of the cage, shivering and scratching. It's vacant eyes seemed to look right through her, and beyond, as if it were seeing something invisible to everybody else.

     Something it longed for.

  ''Just one?'' she asked, quizzically. ''What is it? It's so......strange looking.''

 ''Poor, pitiful thing,'' the zookeeper said, sad now. ''It's all alone. But, I do try to keep it pacified at least.''

''Is it dangerous?'' she asked, shuddering. ''Worse than the other .....uh...''

  ''I was told it could be,'' he said. ''I had to get special permission from the DNA council just to grow it.''

 

                    The visitor stepped closer to the cage, suddenly stepping backward, eyes wide, mouth agape. ''NO....it..it can't be! Don't tell me that you've re-created a -''

      ''Yes,'' the zookeeper said glumly. ''It's a human.''


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Yes, a true stinker, the human can be. Nice!

Posted: Mar 19, 2007

Hah I guessed the twist! Very interesting though. Reads like an episode of the twilight zone. I really like the style of writing.

Posted: Mar 20, 2007

I liked it a lot. Just one question, what species are the visitors to the Zoo and the Zoo keeper? "DNA COUNCIL", very good, relevant for our time.

Posted: Nov 16, 2007

Interesting... the twist caught me off guard, a nice touch there. Also, when the visitor says "re-create", it's actually 're-create'. Idk, just something I spotted.

Very nice work though, I hope to see more like it in the future.

Posted: Jan 27, 2008

Sally
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ummm well it seems prettt well done i like it a good twist

Posted: Mar 12, 2008

Liked the story, nice, it leaves me wondering what the zoo keeper looked like and what evolutionary path was taken. Are they aliens or a newly evolved earth creature? Check out my stoies on booksie in particular Charley the hyperchimp.

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

kristy
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fuckin a

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Very interesting.

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

a human, the most evil creature on earth. lol just joking great post bro, very creepy.

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

lalalalallaallaal
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THAT STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!! :-)

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

lol I want a part two :), I'll be honest I really wasn't expecting it to be a human. I liked it.

Posted: Oct 5, 2008



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