After a long while I wrote a poem so to be frank I do not know how well I wrote and I guess it will be weak compared to my other stuff. But criticism is appreciated. So to the story…it’s about a father in distress and he just doesn’t know what to do. He simply wants to die. So pleads that mercy on him and the angel of death take him away. But his daughter tells him to hang on. She is going through great pain as well and wants her father to know that without his support she too will die. She pleads to him that have mercy on her and sleep in her arms; his little angel. And so the father moved by his daughter’s love for him makes a choice that he has to be there for his daughter as she has been there for him. His pain fades and he finds hope and so does she. I choose the father daughter relationship because what I have seen in my life is that this relation can either be so pure that it is angelic and on the other hand be so badly abused that it seems a work of a devil. So if any father or daughter reads my poem please be there for another. This love is more pure than any you will ever know.
Submitted:Mar 5, 2010 Reads: 73 Comments: 7 Likes: 2
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