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So, I need like full proof honest comeback on this. I have to turn it in on the 21 of February this year, and I need to know if it makes any sense. I used some verses of love and mixed it together to make this. If this sucks, I'll just have to go with the alternative and memorize a stinkin poem...
Submitted:Feb 19, 2013 Reads: 25 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
Now I will tell you
What I’ve done
For you
Fifty-thousand tears I’ve cried
Screaming,
Deceiving,
Bleeding-
For you
But you don’t seem to hear me
And then
Once upon
A tragic time
There was
A girl
Who lost her mind
She fell in love
With a really handsome boy
But she never got a chance to learn
And these are the biggest regrets of my
Life
Oh, yes
These are the biggest regrets of my
Life
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