"That's it! One more lap to go…" I told myself. In my
mind I saw myself holding up that bright, shiny gold medal that I
had worked so hard for. My body was burning up despite the
freezing temperature of water around me. I could hear the cheers
of the enthusiastic crowd from beneath the water's surface.
Faster and faster I swam, my body ached in protest but
nevertheless, I willed myself to go even further.
Then, I hit the concrete wall and burst towards the
surface gasping for air. The crowd erupted in cheers and I saw
the people form my country jumping like crazy. "Five minutes and
forty-eight seconds, in first place… Mitsume Fujiwara, Japan!"
the announcer broadcasted. I could not believe my ears. Five
minutes and forty-eight seconds! This was the best record that I
had ever set for my 400 meters freestyle games. I felt that
satisfactory smile spreading across my face. All those years of
training paid off. My lungs were still struggling to breathe
properly when my coach came up to me and pulled me out of the
"Congratulations, Mitsume, you did it." My coach
congratulated. I shook my head and told him "It's only possible
because I have a good coach." He smiled and handed me my towel.
The effort I had put in paid off eventually. I walked up to the
resting bench where all my friends were waiting. As I removed my
goggles and swimming cap, Yume came up and hugged me. "You did
it." She said. I gave her a smile, then drank some water and
When my lungs began to function properly again, the
announcer called for the top three athletes to receive their
prize. I stepped forward and was awarded a gold medal. "Smile."
said the photographer. I smiled and shook hands with the
presenter. Then I left. Even as I walked back to the changing
room, I could still hear the people form my country shouting for
joy behind me.
I took a shower and reflected on my win. It felt so
surreal. This is day that I had dreamt of my entire life, I won a
medal at the first Youth Olympics and it felt great. The feeling
of loneliness just went away.
While my other regular friends went out to the mall,
I spent my time swimming laps after laps for hours. The coach was
really strict. Immediately after school, I had to swim from three
to six. I also had to watch my diet and ensured that I minimized
the intake of sweet or cold food. I used to be envious of people
who could eat chocolates and ice cream because I could never do
so. The prize often does not come without a price.
For this prize, I had sacrificed my time for five
years as a regular teenager. I did not go to malls, have a
relationship, and eat junk food like normal teenagers. I also did
not have many friends because the only friends I had were the
friends who stuck with me during training. However, I felt that
this price was simply worth it because the prize was not just the
medal and glory. It is the satisfaction of achievement that would
stay with me for life.