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Random First Lines:ORIGINAL STORY: THE LOST JEWELS
(AUTHOR: RABINDRANATH TAGORE)
â€˜â€˜A COMPLETE SELF-ANALYSIS,
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This is a story about a man who only has seven more days to live.
By Michael Jameson
After reviewing my first chapter of runaway I decide I didn't like where it was going though so this is a complete do over which I feel more confident with, there are a few spelling/grammar issues so your comments would be appreciated, as well as your overall thoughts.
It's hard to find the right time to change everything
hope is nowhere to found
leave your past in the past
getting better each day
tired of all the games
By Vernham Chronicles
Coarse fishing specimen hunter James, reads a report of a giant carp being sighted in an angling publication. His curiosity gets the better of him!
Short Story | Updated Jun 29, 2014 | Reads: 83 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 1
so hurt you are ready to go
I just wish I could move on
When injured famous 21 year old Natalie Portman is sent to experience life with the well known Avengers she must either trust herself or watch as her world falls away into streaming puddles of worries.
Copyright 2014 by LoneStallion54
A 24 hour college day. I wrote this a while ago while visiting someone in their lecture hall so I suppose some words may be open to interpretation. It was one of my only poetry writings so let me know what you think.
just can't break away