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By Fcage  (booksie.com)

Just an excerpt...

Novel | Updated Apr 20, 2014 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: Critique

A False Belief About Men

By Hyperactiverice  (booksie.com)

A poem about how men are looked upon in today's society, there is a false assumption about men.

Poetry | Updated Feb 22, 2014 | Reads: 11 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 0
Tags: Sad,Poetry,Depression,Depressing,Men,Women,Society,Wow,Creative,Writing,Art,Project,I,Guess,Please,Review,Critique

chris_green

Buy And Buy

By Chris Green  (booksie.com)

Set in the future a year or so down the road, a couple start a fightback against rampant materialism.

Short Story | Updated Feb 17, 2014 | Reads: 12 | Comments: 3 | Likes: 2
Tags: Materialism,Critique,Satire,Philosophy

Excerpt From A Book I'm Writing

By Hyperactiverice  (booksie.com)

This is an excerpt from a book that I have started writing, please give feedback, don't hold back!

Short Story | Updated Feb 15, 2014 | Reads: 9 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 0
Tags: Book,Critique,Please,I,Need,Help,Short,Story,Poetry,Romance,Young,Adult,Good,Wow,Read

Beat

By Hyperactiverice  (booksie.com)

Basically, this short story is based off of a dream I had. Never written/finished a story before so.. idk enjoy or something

Short Story | Updated Jan 5, 2014 | Reads: 13 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 0
Tags: Dream,Weird,Help,Comments,Review,Critique,Please,Idk,Lol

Critiques

By Zm East  (booksie.com)

Musings.

Miscellaneous | Updated May 23, 2013 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: Musings,Writing,Critique

Very Short Story, Needing Judgement On Style Please.

By Exstasis  (booksie.com)

I've always been told I should write. I never do for some reason... An old flame asked me to write her a story after a couple of drinks. So I did, but now I'm considering getting more serious about writing. Want some honest critique and opinions on style if anyone has the time.

Short Story | Updated Jan 22, 2013 | Reads: 3 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 1
Tags: Critique,Short,Story,Help,Please

Impending Catastrophe

By Parkachu0  (booksie.com)

This work in progress of a book is- like many other stories out there today- about the apocalypse. I will be uploading these chapter by chapter, unless I either got a lot more done, or a little more done. Please, please, PLEASE give critiques!! This is my very first book I have done, so...

Miscellaneous | Updated Sep 23, 2012 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 1
Tags: Fiction,Apocalypse,Book,Chapter,Please,Critique,First,Person,Rain,Flood,Banana,Cupcake

Damn Kids These Days

By Clive Fitzgerald  (booksie.com)

Ignorance, unintelligent, arrogance, and pure irrational thinking seems to be ever abundant in the world today. The change comes from kids

Poetry | Updated Aug 23, 2012 | Reads: 3 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 5
Tags: Life,Contemporary,Critique,Children,Kids,Ignorance,Bias,Unintelligent

Tempting Mistake

By Maisy1996  (booksie.com)

It was a spur of the moment which made 18 year old Ethan Black, a shy young man first approach 17 year old Avery Scarlet, a easily angered but sweet sometimes girl. She's the girl that people were intmidated by, he on the other hand is the type that may look like a Golden boy but it's another...

Book | Updated Jul 11, 2012 | Reads: 8 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: If,You,See,Any,Mistakes,Please,Critique,Because,I,Want,To,Grow,As,A,Writer,And,Need,The,Help,Of

nocturnallife453

Revision Plan

By Nocturnallife453  (booksie.com)

How I plan to revise Everlae.

Miscellaneous | Updated Jul 9, 2012 | Reads: 20 | Comments: 2 | Likes: 4
Tags: Revision,Everlae,Plan,Critique,Partner

Analysis Of Lolita

By Boxinglegendface  (booksie.com)

Analysis of Nabokov's novel Lolita

Essay | Updated Jul 5, 2012 | Reads: 113 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 1
Tags: Midsummers,Night,Dream,Lolita,Analytical,Paper,Critique,Humbert

armen_melikian

Journey To Virginland: Epistle I

By Armen Melikian  (booksie.com)

At turns heartbreaking and diabolically funny, Journey to Virginland is an avant-garde tour de force, delivered by a master storyteller. The protagonist, a loutish and uber-cerebral antihero known simply as Dog, takes on the challenge to navigate the perilous paradigm shifts of our age,...

Novel | Updated Jun 1, 2012 | Reads: 8 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: Armen,Melikian,Contemporary,Literature,Avant-garde,Fiction,Modern,American,Post-modern,Against,Convention,Philosophical,Religion,Religious,Revolution,Dogma,Black,Humor,Exiled

Still Moving: A Review

By Sarah Tucci  (booksie.com)

This is a critique of the University of Central Florida 2012 BFA exhibit: Still Moving.

Miscellaneous | Updated Apr 25, 2012 | Reads: 6 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: Ucf,Bfa,Art,Critique

dibbledabble

Comments Please!

By Dibbledabble  (booksie.com)

A few of us Booksians are trying to get some useful changes to the format of the site. I have taken on the small task of creating a ‘code’ that writers can use to indicate the type of feedback they are looking for. Here is a little rhyme to explain the reasoning and to gather some...

Poetry | Updated Jan 21, 2012 | Reads: 7 | Comments: 3 | Likes: 24
Tags: Comment,Remark,Review,Critique,Reply

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