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Chekhov And The Pursuit Of The General Idea

By Oleg Roschin  (booksie.com)

A short essay analyzing some of Anton Chekhov's prose from a Christian viewpoint

Essay | Updated Jun 11, 2015 | Reads: 6 | Comments: 2 | Likes: 0
Tags: Literature,Chekhov,Literary,Analysis,Essay,Christian,Critique

Playground

By Izmi  (booksie.com)

Please note, this is not the full version, this is merely an intro of an idea I have for a new story. If you read this, don't be afraid to critque it as hard as you want. If it's the worst thing you've ever read in your life and it gave you cancer from reading it, feel free to tell me.

Short Story | Updated Mar 26, 2015 | Reads: 5 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: Intro,Demo,Critique,Not,Finished

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Text Message

By Deannamonet  (booksie.com)

isn't it interesting how one set of words on a screen can affect someone so much? Maybe it's because it's from someone you love. Maybe it's because they knew what they'd say would hurt you, and they sent the message anyways.

Poetry | Updated Mar 24, 2015 | Reads: 14 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 1
Tags: Comment,Read,Love,Hurt,Pain,Text,Critique,Poem,Personal,Opinions,Help,Like

Rise Of The Gods

By Aestradaaththcv  (booksie.com)

2015. Modern Day Society. Humans live in pure bliss and ignorance, unaware of their own history. Unaware, that what they thought was myth and legend is coming back to take its revenge on those who forget them. The gods, imprisoned by humans, are returning after years of waiting. The doors that...

Novel | Updated Mar 2, 2015 | Reads: 18 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 1
Tags: Hth,Senior,Project,Student,Work,Fantasy,Mythology,Gods,Original,Feedback,And,Critique,Needed

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Trilogy Of Linus 1: The Redeemer

By Scripturer  (booksie.com)

Linus's journal writings and a day at one of his favourite coffee shops.

Novel | Updated Jan 5, 2015 | Reads: 25 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 1
Tags: Sci-fi,Critique,Society,Philosophy,Sadness

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The Toy

By Deannamonet  (booksie.com)

A boy I once new Used my heart and broke it in two

Poetry | Updated Nov 30, 2014 | Reads: 23 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 1
Tags: Toy,Poetry,Personal,Late,Night,Hurt,Pain,Boy,Girl,Doll,Used,Played,True,Honest,Story,Like,Read,Critique,Comment,Please

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Toby

By Emily Burke  (booksie.com)

Sophie is a fifteen year old teenager who lives in an idyllic small town with her parents and her little brother Toby. Her completely normal life is utterly destroyed when Toby is killed in a car accident right outside her door. Everyone is devastated - except Sophie, because she can still see...

Novel | Updated Jul 5, 2014 | Reads: 138 | Comments: 5 | Likes: 11
Tags: Fiction,Death,Sister,Brother,Love,Sad,Acceptance,Learn,Teenager,Child,Parents,Critique

Excerpt From A Story #1

By Fcage  (booksie.com)

Just an excerpt...

Novel | Updated Apr 20, 2014 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: Critique

A False Belief About Men

By Hyperactiverice  (booksie.com)

A poem about how men are looked upon in today's society, there is a false assumption about men.

Poetry | Updated Feb 22, 2014 | Reads: 5 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 0
Tags: Sad,Poetry,Depression,Depressing,Men,Women,Society,Wow,Creative,Writing,Art,Project,I,Guess,Please,Review,Critique

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Buy And Buy

By Chris Green  (booksie.com)

Set in the future a year or so down the road, a couple start a fightback against rampant materialism.

Short Story | Updated Feb 17, 2014 | Reads: 18 | Comments: 4 | Likes: 4
Tags: Mystery,Materialism,Critique,Satire,Philosophy

Excerpt From A Book I'm Writing

By Hyperactiverice  (booksie.com)

This is an excerpt from a book that I have started writing, please give feedback, don't hold back!

Short Story | Updated Feb 15, 2014 | Reads: 11 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 0
Tags: Book,Critique,Please,I,Need,Help,Short,Story,Poetry,Romance,Young,Adult,Good,Wow,Read

Beat

By Hyperactiverice  (booksie.com)

Basically, this short story is based off of a dream I had. Never written/finished a story before so.. idk enjoy or something

Short Story | Updated Jan 5, 2014 | Reads: 14 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 0
Tags: Dream,Weird,Help,Comments,Review,Critique,Please,Idk,Lol

Critiques

By Zm East  (booksie.com)

Musings.

Miscellaneous | Updated May 23, 2013 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0
Tags: Musings,Writing,Critique

Very Short Story, Needing Judgement On Style Please.

By Exstasis  (booksie.com)

I've always been told I should write. I never do for some reason... An old flame asked me to write her a story after a couple of drinks. So I did, but now I'm considering getting more serious about writing. Want some honest critique and opinions on style if anyone has the time.

Short Story | Updated Jan 22, 2013 | Reads: 3 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 1
Tags: Critique,Short,Story,Help,Please

Impending Catastrophe

By Parkachu0  (booksie.com)

This work in progress of a book is- like many other stories out there today- about the apocalypse. I will be uploading these chapter by chapter, unless I either got a lot more done, or a little more done. Please, please, PLEASE give critiques!! This is my very first book I have done, so...

Miscellaneous | Updated Sep 23, 2012 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 1
Tags: Fiction,Apocalypse,Book,Chapter,Please,Critique,First,Person,Rain,Flood,Banana,Cupcake

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