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It's My first story and i hope you like it. anything i should change? anything i need to improve on?
the story is about a small group of people that go hiking to get to the peak of a mountain for the main characters wife's birthday. but they take a wrong turn somewhere and get lost.
Short Story | Updated Apr 12, 2008 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 5 | Likes: 5