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By Hinrey Snakespear
(I will be updating this piece in segments)
This is a piece I have been working on for a while now, I am unsure as to how often I will be updating it, or how big the updates will be, but hopefully those updates will happen.
A few critique questions for this piece:
-How is the mood of it?
And that's all we did, drink, kiss and stare at each other. We didn't talk at all, probably because there was nothing to be said. We just stood there enjoying each other's company. I never thought of myself as someone who would act the way I did then, especially with a stranger. But people...
When their world is suddenly torn apart Lilian and Erica must find new life with a bunch of rebels living in the woods outside the kingdom. There they find more than they thought possible and also a purpose in the fight against the king.
Novel | Updated Jun 23, 2008 | Reads: 1 | Comments: 5 | Likes: 3