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Ever had the problem of speaking and never quite getting your point across.
When even politeness has no effect.
This is for angellyn's challenge!! Well, I chose the word 'love'..and I hope I did justice to it!
Please read and let me know how it is! good or bad!!^^
By Onion Knight
Although I do not like the memories, without a doubt, this was one of the most emotionally filled pieces I had ever done.
Poetry | Updated Nov 16, 2008 | Reads: 4 | Comments: 1 | Likes: 9
Oh god I can't even begin to explain how great this poem was. He completely knocked me out of my seat. He used such beautiful words, that are usually hidden away under metaphors and similes in other poems I have read. He's taken something so easy, and turned it into a suspense filling, panic...
Poetry | Updated Jul 17, 2008 | Reads: 2 | Comments: 0 | Likes: 0