Alone, in a damage wreck of a car. This is this least of her worries. She was not as alone as she thought, and she didn't remember anything that happened, or even her own name. And what made all of this worse was how she was running out of time...
Iâ€™ve always been somewhat fascinated by kidnappings, reading stories and watching movies. Iâ€™d always put myself in the kidnapped personâ€™s shoes, think about how Iâ€™d be smarter than them and get away scratch free. I know now I was wrong.
(This is a fictional story abou...
I just wanted to put this out there to get the general idea of what people think. I haven't done any checks, so it'll have a few errors or glitches in the flow. But I just want to know if it vaguely interests you in any way, that's all. However, any constructive criticism is
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This is a WIP story that im working on, i'm 13 and looking to see if I have potensial.
Thanks please tell me if my story is good and what I can do to it.
It's short and I wrote it in 15 mins.
IT IS NOT FINISHED!
Help me finish it and tell me how you liked it and what I could do better and how I ...
A young girl lives a normal life but soon discovers recent news stories revealing shocking reports. It seems the dead are coming back. Yet nobody knows why and how, so she feels she needs to find out the secrets that officials are keeping from us. Joined by a close 'friend', she travels to where ...