A strange short story written in the point of view of a creepy killer who is on the loose. He chooses, watched and kills his victims carefully...
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Short Story
| Updated May 19, 2013
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Tags: creepy, thriller, killer, woman
10 year old Hannah didn't know what to expect that night father came home. But when she suddenly finds herself covered in blood and in a place where everyone is weary of her, will she survive? Or will father come and pick her up?
Gabby is just starting college. How far will her roommate, Nadia, go to keep Gabby all to herself? Nadia is obsessed and will do anything to isolate Gabby. Will things get better before things turn deadly?
Michael Ross is a young teenager who sees more than other people. The year is 2135 and all the different countries of the world have united to create Unitar. Run by the union, which is led by Him. They control everything the people watch, read, and learn. Rebel forces have been trying to fight ag...
This is just the first 900 words of a large story i'm planning to write, and i was wondering whether to cut this or not? Thank you for your help.
It's the part where we meet the two main characters, and start to establish a bit of the background.
Book
| Updated May 14, 2013
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Matthew is an atletic student at Blue Falls High School. He plays footbal and the Blue Falls High Cougars are going to the state championship. But things turn drematic.