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death in my arms

Book By: josie
Thrillers


about a girl dying by gun and message at end. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 18    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


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held her in my arms as her cold wet blood dripped down my pure white top. As the wind blew, while the leaves made a circle around us her heart started to slow but the love was still there the friendship clung on. As she held my hand I felt the trembling of her life, she said she saw he life flash before her eyes. I assured her she would be fine but I needed more reassuring. Why did the boy have to carrying a gun, I’m lucky I ran for help, she was only trying to help too, she was phoning for help. I guess he got scared but that didn’t help I mean him shooting, as I heard the gun shot I was scared, who was shot? I ran back but I was too late he was gone she was hurt where was the ambulance but as I held her close she started to say “ I’ll miss…” but never finished I was so sad she was gone my heart was torn in two I couldn’t bare the thought my best friend died in my arms that night I’ll never forget my friend and how she died.

So let this be a message if you carry a gun you could be putting someone else’s life in danger so is it worth it because your friends do it.

DON’T CARRY A GUN!!!

Death In my arms


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