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We allways knew we were different. We just had all the required traits to make us "wierd" Oprphans, baces, glasses, scary talking vioces in our heads dictating our every move. Yup, we were something else. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 Reads: 49 Comments: 6 Likes: 2
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Aww..Sad end. =( Hopes she's happy again.
Posted: Jul 16, 2008
Freakyyy!! But so damn goood! I love this! :)
Posted: Jul 16, 2008
I like these so far. I wonder how many more you have cooked up your sleeve.
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
It's very Big Brother like, as in 1984, is that right? I think so. Very good!
One question - why is it 'The Vioce', not 'The Voice'?
:)
The Rogue Hat Company
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
hey man this is so good so far im heading to the third chapter...
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
hi! alice. ending is sad but u show an eye for detail. that keeps a reader engaged. hope she escapes from his clutches. good so far. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
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