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We allways knew we were different. We just had all the required traits to make us "wierd" Oprphans, baces, glasses, scary talking vioces in our heads dictating our every move. Yup, we were something else. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


Marcrutio
My fingers danced on the strings of my guitar, strumming another love song. Another one for her. My beautiful, beautiful love. Not as if I had much else to do. I had just been fired, again. It wasn’t my fault, though. It was never my fault.
“Marcrutio” I dropped my guitar. Oh no. The voice always ment bad news.
“What do you want?”
“Don’t talk to me like that!”
“What do you want!?”
“YOU WILL TREAT ME WITH RESPECT! Now APOLOGIZE!!!!!”
“You just lost me another job! I will never apologize to you!” I didn’t care if it killed me. Not anymore. I just didn’t want to live anymore. I made this life miserable. So miserable.
Oh crap. I was walking toward the oven. It was making me.
“Apologize!” I wouldn’t. It hasn’t ever done anything to deserve respect. My hand wrenched itself on the oven top.
“Apologize!”
“No!” My other hand flew to the switch.
“Fine, don’t, but after I make you burn your hand off, There are others I can make you hurt,” I knew exactly who he meant. Not because she was closest to me, although she was. Because she was the only one I’d ever cared about. It’s not as if this voice would let me have a family, and it’s not like I was born with one. I was orphaned.
“Well?”
“I’m sorry,” I mumbled. My body crashed to the floor when he released his grip on me.
I’ll be back tomorrow, Marcrutio, and you will be much more polite. I felt him leave me. I was slumped on the floor, my head bowed. He can’t hurt her. He just can’t. In that one horrible horrible moment of total defeat, I cryed.


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Ooooooooh. I have to say this is gonna be a favorite of mine. I can already feel it. :P

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

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yeah! :)

Cruel. So very Cruel. I hope nothing happens to her or Marcrutio. Let me know when the rest is out. =3

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

It has a happy ending! Nothing does!

Woah! This is like, mega amazing!!
Going to next chapter...
...i hope nothing bad happens, though i know it will :D
Good Work!!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thnx!!!

wow!!!..
*scurries off 2 read nxt chapter!*..
xox

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thnx!

the suspence is killing me!

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Coolio!!!!!!!!



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