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We allways knew we were different. We just had all the required traits to make us "wierd" Oprphans, baces, glasses, scary talking vioces in our heads dictating our every move. Yup, we were something else. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 18, 2008 Reads: 58 Comments: 14 Likes: 4
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:] That was pretty cool. In a non-dying way.
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Very Interesting... :) The voices in our head, yes? I guess we all have them, but hopefully not one so freaky!
Good stuff.
The Rogue Hat Company
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Gawd. What a pickle!?
Im so excited for the next chapter...comment me when you post please :D
This plot is so intriguing and original, and i think that you must be very talented to be able to tell tales like this.
I love your style, which is interesting but not too depressing.
Go you!!!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Not bad. This was better than the last. =] Can't wait to read more.. =3
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Hahaha! That was amazing. The last line was priceless... I wish I could have seen her face. LOl.
I want MORE!!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
I meant that it was cool no one died just yet.
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Sweet! I love this:D Could you tell me when you post more?? Thanks:) I love this concept, by the way...the voices in our head gone horrifically wrong...dun dun DUN!! lol. nice job:)
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
well simply one word splendid
Posted: Jul 20, 2008
yooh av 2 comment me wen nxt yooh post!..
i HAVE to read mor of this!..
=D..
xoxox
Posted: Jul 20, 2008
I like it so far. Can't wait to read more. Please keep me updated.
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
Keep informing when there is more!
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
im so impressed of your talent its so original and awesome so far(the story) hehe cant wait to read more please tel me when the next chapter is up
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
This is great writing. It really excites me and makes me read more. Keep up the good work. ^_^
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
hay girl whens the next chapter coming? i want it now!
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
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