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The Shoot Up

Novel By: Aussieb

10 years after the incidents of School Shooting have occurred, new shooters decide enough is enough. It is time to take another class hostage. Will these kids escape? Or is this the end of all of their lives? View table of contents...


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Submitted:May 3, 2011    Reads: 20    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

"If you pull that trigger, a bullet is going in your brain. Now... drop it." Kevin said, looking at Owen.


"How are we going to get back?" Shannon asked, sipping at coffee.

"A plane."

"We just lost our tickets."

"I'll find a way." Austin said.

Ten minutes later they were boarding a plane to Florida.

"Cant get any easier." Shannon said.

"I wonder whats happening right now." Austin said, buckling up.


"What about Max Sturgess?" Breanna asked the cop.

"Sir?" the cop said into the talkie.

"Yes?" the voice replied.

"I know where your son is............. Over."

"What?" Breanna was shocked.

"Max Sturgess is one of our cops sons. He ran away and now we found him."

"Where is his dad?" Breanna asked.

"Holding back the crowd at the school."

"Where is Taylor?" Breanna asked.

"Im not sure, now little gril please seat down."

"I am not a little girl, I want to see Taylor." Breanna said, standing up.


"Do what the cop says." David said, looking at Owen. Owen's head was looking back and forth from David to Kevin.

"Don't tell me what to do."Owen said.

"Put it down." Kevin said.

Kathy was holding onto Dwayne.

"How about I do this." Owen said.

Owen whipped around, fell to the floor on his stomach and shot the gun. The bullet flew through the air as David jumped back, hitting the floor and sliding. The bullet soared through the air as Kevin pulled the trigger of his gun. Owen's bullet impaled Kevin's good leg and exited through the back. Kevin fell to the floor in a heap. Kevin's bullet hit the floor a few inches from Owen.

Kathy began running towards the door as David got up. Owen got on his knees, saw Taylor was running and began shooting at her. The bullets hit the wall behind her as she ducked and dodged as best as she could. The last bullet in his chamber hit her in the leg. She fell to the floor with a thud a few inches from Kevin's gun. Kevin had knocked himself out as he hit the floor. Owen jumped up, aiming the gun at Kathy, who had her back towards him.

He walked over to her, limping.

"Fuck you." he said, aiming the gun at her. He pulled the trigger.


He didn't realize the gun was empty until he pulled the trigger.

"No," Kathy said, rolling to face Owen. "Fuck you."

She aimed the gun at his nuts and pulled the trigger.


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