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Party gone bad!!

Novel By: crzyanglcassie14
Thrillers


So her name is Marie and her and Jake are... YOU'LL JUST HAVE TO FIND OUT!! lol I will not tell you the story. Please comment. I only update if theres comments!! bye bye!! ENJOY
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Submitted: Sep 14, 2008    Reads: 197    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


                     My name is Marie, and I'm 16 years old.  I absolutely love to party with my friends.  I know, I know.  I'm underage and shouldn't be drinking.  But we're just having some fun.  Little did I know this fun would turn into my worst nightmare. 

                    I drank a little too much for what I can remember.  So my friend offered to give me a ride.  I didn't realize that he was also drinking.  He was acting a little funny, but I thought nothing of it.  I got in the car and thats when the whole nightmare started. 

                    We were driving but we needed to get gas so we ended up stopping at this deserted gas station.  It was deserted all but one car, which didn't seem to have anyone in it.  My friend Jake got out of the car and started pumping the gas.  When all the sudden there was a gun shot.  The next thing I knew, Jake was on the ground and someone was pulling me out of the car.  The second person was dragging Jake.   I tried to fight back, and I'm a pretty good fighter when my life is on the line.  But all the sudden everything went blank.  The only thing I felt was a sharp pain in my head, then everything went black.  There was nothing. 


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Comments:

Can't wait to read more!

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad to hear you like it! I updated! I hope you comment on the next chapter. Sorry, I didn't update faster. I wanted to keep you waiting. Aren't I evil? Well, I hope you enjoy chapter 2!

More?

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I just updated! I hope you like chapter 2. I hope I didn't upset you too bad with the cliff hanger. :p. Sorry, for keeping you waiting so long. I love to make people go nutts!! :p Thanks for reading, and I hope you comment on chapter 2 too!

☺ Please update soon!!!!

Posted: Sep 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I did, I did!! I hope you love chapter 2! Thankyou for reading! And I'm glad you liked chapter 1. Please comment on chapter 2. Still the policy of if you don't comment then there is not an update. oooo I'm really mean. Sorry. :p Once again really happy you liked it and I hope you like chapter 2 even more!!

ohhh what's gonna happen?? Oh yea I can just read the next chappie! LOL

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

haha. Yep! You get lucky. But what happens when there isn't a next chapter??? :o uh ohs!! Lol. Have fun reading on and thanks for the comment! Take care!!
~Love~
Cassie



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