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Party gone bad!!

Novel By: crzyanglcassie14

So her name is Marie and her and Jake are... YOU'LL JUST HAVE TO FIND OUT!! lol I will not tell you the story. Please comment. I only update if theres comments!! bye bye!! ENJOY
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Submitted:Sep 14, 2008    Reads: 774    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   

My name is Marie, and I'm 16 years old. I absolutely love to party with my friends. I know, I know. I'm underage and shouldn't be drinking. But we're just having some fun. Little did I know this fun would turn into my worst nightmare.

I drank a little too much for what I can remember. So my friend offered to give me a ride. I didn't realize that he was also drinking. He was acting a little funny, but I thought nothing of it. I got in the car and thats when the whole nightmare started.

We were driving but we needed to get gas so we ended up stopping at this deserted gas station. It was deserted all but one car, which didn't seem to have anyone in it. My friend Jake got out of the car and started pumping the gas. When all the sudden there was a gun shot. The next thing I knew, Jake was on the ground and someone was pulling me out of the car. The second person was dragging Jake. I tried to fight back, and I'm a pretty good fighter when my life is on the line. But all the sudden everything went blank. The only thing I felt was a sharp pain in my head, then everything went black. There was nothing.


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