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Roller Coasters and Freaks

Novel By: KytrisVemidethMedera
Thrillers



Raised on the streets of a theme park Rin was left there after the death of both of her parents. She learned the ways of the thief, and later took in a lost child that later joined her in her mission to survive, but once among her findings she discovers a red vile that later her and her companion Elizabeth conclude is blood. She rests that night with a slight unease only to find a hand slip around hers the following morning during her daily pickpocket. Now after being discovered by the man whose blood she stole she must fight to protect both of them. Rin is talented though and has acquired the skill and knowledge to use the theme park rides to her advantage, but what about this stranger gives him the upper hand? Why is he there? What does he need that blood? And most importantly, where did he get it from? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


I screamed as the roller coaster crashed down over a slope, the wind winding through my hair. I glanced quickly to my right sides to see my parent’s amused expressions their hands high over their heads. “Rin, this next drop is high hold on dear!” I smiled happily at my adoptive parents, my dad’s rustled hair glued oddly his face from the wind.

            Then, I was happy. I had no family left except for my parents, and we had recently moved far away from our old home. I didn’t feel alone…I never really did…my parents were always with me. Even as a seven year old, I never felt alone in the world, until then.

            I lifted my arms as we hovered over the largest drop, and in a  matter of seconds, our car went plummeting down. I winced hearing the screams of the visitors sitting behind me.

           

I felt so happy then.

 

Yet soon the screams were silenced as the car began to rock unsteadily on the rails. Then it happened.

 

It ruined my life.

 

I suddenly heard a loud screech, and suddenly I felt the car turn awkwardly over the rail that it had once sat upon.

 

            That one loose bolt ruined my life…but in a way.

 

            Soon the car was plummeting to the ground at an amazing speed, I saw the earth below us grow closer and closer, and the last things I remember was the halter of my chest lifting up, and I felt my body being thrown from the coaster into something that nearly took my consciousness. I heard something crash, and soon flames could be heard crackling in the distance.

 

            In a way…it changed me…for the better.

 

I blacked out there and no one ever found me…I hid. I new what would happen if they found me. I would be sent away to a foster home. I never forgot the last moments of that ride, and eventually I knew how I had survived. My parents ripped of my halter and showing me a better chance of survival threw me from the ride, to save my life. From then on, I lived at the park, its rides, its stands, all of this my home, my food, my life. I’m seventeen now…and nothing has changed, I’ve learned how to survive in this place. I’m strong now, both physically and mentally.

 

It changed me…for the better…or for the worse, but I don’t care.

 

 

I’m living to survive now.

 

            I waited in the darkness, watching as a cart rolled past me violently, the passengers unaware of my presence. This was the haunted castle, in other words; my best source of money. My feet made no sound against the plastered rock beneath me, as I inched near a cart. It swooned past me slowly, and I attached myself to the side, my fingers hooked over the back edge.

I winced hearing a bystander scream, as a manikin jumped from the wall. I waited cautiously until we reached the pitch black, room, and quickly the cart began to spin. I wasted no time, before lifting myself up and, slipping my hand over the strap to the purse, that I had seen a woman carry in before. I stole it out, and whipped back into position before the ride stopped, and continued to progress to the exit. Before reaching the exit I slid the purse back unnoticed.

 


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Comments:

This sounds really good.
and a really differant topic.
Update me when you post more
:]

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

ill try

WOW, this is so original, intriguing and fantastically written. Absolutely love it!
KEEP GOING and let me knwo when you've posted more!!

Alex :)

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

ok ok, since ive gotten the most comments ont his, ill update.



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