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The Price Of Blood

Novel By: WhatIsInAName
Thrillers


When Rebecca moves to Whitby with her sister Alyson she expects her life to be a bore. But, like most quant little towns there are great secrets and legends hidden just under the surface.
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Submitted: Jul 14, 2008    Reads: 208    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Chapter 1 - Moving.

I took one last look at my old house. The empty windows, dark slate roof and the empty swing in my back garden.

“Rebecca!” My sister called. “We have to go.”

I picked up the last box of my things and myself to the back seat of my sisters red Toyota.

“Honestly,” she said, twisting her sandy blonde hair around her shoulder. “You’d think we had all day to get down to Whitby.”

My sister, Alyson, had been offered a new job. She was a photographer and some big corporation had seen some of her stuff on deviant art and had immediately wanted to hire her. So, that’s where we had to go live now. It was a long distance from Aberdeen to Whitby about 7 and a half hours by car! I really wasn’t looking forward to this. My sister loved driving though - it was the only little pleasure she had…after…my mum and dad died.

They died in a plane crash about 2 years ago. I was only 14 and my sister had only just turned 22. She became my guardian after that and at times I feel she really lost part of her social life, she spent so much time trying to look after me - and be mum - that she really didn’t have much time for her friends or for boyfriends anymore. Even now she was moving for my benefit, I was going to be leaving school next year and we really didn’t have enough money for me to go to university. This job meant more money - which meant college for me and even less of a social life for her. Keeping that in mind, I tried not to moan about moving too much. I was going to miss my friends terribly though, even the little things like the taste of Scottish water and the crappy Scottish TV.

I relaxed in the back seat and read “most notorious unsolved murders.”
I loved non-fiction books. Especially books about murders - maybe that made me weird, I don’t know.
I caught my sister frowning at me in the rear view mirror.
“What?” I asked, slightly annoyed.
“ Unsolved murders? What are you, Hercule Poirot?”
“What’s wrong with unsolved murders?”
“It’s just a bit… middle aged. Don’t you like fantasies?”
“No.”
“Do you know that Whitby has lots of Vampire Folklore?”
“Oh really?” I said, not amused.
“Yep. Bram Stoker wrote “Dracula” there. Apparently he based it around all the dead bodies that kept being found on shore.”
“Most likely due to crashed boats. I doubt there radars were up to scratch in the 1800's”
“Oh, Rebecca. You ruin all my fun. What if you go down to Whitby and fall in love with a Vampire?” She said and winked at me in the rear view mirror.
“Alyson, you’ve been reading way to much of Twilight.”
“Shut up.” She laughed.


The next few hours passed slowly. I fell asleep once we were past Carlisle. It was sunny when I woke up. I rolled down my windows and rubbed my eyes.
“We’re here.” Alyson said, smiling.
We drove down quant little roads. Whitby was a real sea front city. I could see lots of hills and boats, everywhere.

The houses were old, white walled and had terracotta slated roofs. I couldn’t see any sort of modern housing to contrast with it.

My sister drove for 20 minutes until she parked near a slightly more modern block of flats.
“This is home.” She said and unclipped her seatbelt.
I stared out of my window, unsure. It didn’t look like a very nice place to live. I instantly missed home.

She had been down the week before with the moving van to put our essentials into the flat.
She smiled encouragingly to me.
“ Well, get a box then.” she laughed.
I got out of the car and picked a box randomly out of the boot of the car.
She unlocked the door of the front of the flats and we got into a tiny, dirty looking elevator.
She pressed the second floor button.
As soon as we stepped out the elevator I noticed how much it smelled like a hospital. The long lights overhead blinked on and off.
My sister led me to the door “2b”
“2b or not 2b!” She laughed.
I shook my head.
“Cheer up.” she said.
She turned the key in the lock and opened the door.

The flat didn’t look too bad.
I went into the living room first. It looked very clean.
We had nice polished hardwood floors and the beige couch from our old living room. The walls were a nice white colour and my sister had decorated the spaces with some of her photographs. We had our big TV at least. I looked around at the kitchen next. It was very small and sat beside the living room. It had a sitting table that came out from the wall. There was black and white checked linoleum design on the floor.
The wall was a sky blue.
I looked into the bathroom after that - fearing the worst. It was nice though. The bathroom was a soft peach colour, with a big shower, a clean looking toilet and a pedestal sink. I turned finally to my room. If it was minuscule I was going to die of disappointment.

The room was BIG, probably bigger than my old room. The walls were a deep yellow. My bed was big, I had a nice large chest of drawers too. My sister had left my laptop on my bed.

She had a picture of her and me framed and hanging just above my bed.
She came into the room.
“You like it?” she smiled.
“Yeah, its great.” I said.
“ it should be a good size for if you have some friends stay over.”
I smiled half-heartedly. I imagined it was going to be difficult to make new friends here.
“ I bet there isn’t much crime here. No murder mysteries for you.”
“What do you mean?” I asked.
“Well, there is only about 13,000 people in Whitby..”
“Are you joking?!” I cut in. With that small amound people it was unlikely there would be much stuff to do. I came from a city where there was at least 200 thousand people and even then there was hardly anything to do!
“No.” She said, sounding amused.
“Oh my god.” I groaned and threw myself back on my bed.
“Bet you’re looking forward to school tomorrow.” she sniggered.


I spent the best part of the night trying to sleep. I was sending my friends emails and IM’s and I felt pretty depressed. I don’t think it had hit me properly until then. I curled up into a little ball and waited for morning to come.


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Comments:

it's great. i love the Twilight reference ;)

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thank you :D Glad you like it :D

This is good you don't even understand how much i can relate to this i used to live in a a very big city with people in the millions living there and so many clothing stores(because i'm a shop-o-holic especially when it comes to buying vans and converses) and i just recently moved to this town with the population of 19,200 which is well nothing compared to where i used to live the good in the moving is everyone is soooo nice they always say hi to you
Anyways i like this chapter, i also love the Twilight reference
You Continue to amaze me
XOXO
DOM =]

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thank you!
Im a big twlight fan!
sadly I'll never be able to write a vampire story like Stephanie Meyer but Im glad you like it ;)
xx

hi! sarah.

1. SARAH: Your name of Sarah makes you easy-going and refined, but detracts from your physical vitality. You desire all the finer things in life--lovely clothes, home, furniture, and environment. However, procrastination is your worst enemy, and you find yourself lacking the ambition to make your dreams a reality often because of lack of confidence. People are inclined to take advantage of your sympathetic, tractable nature. You naturally attract people with problems who seek your understanding and advice.


2. SARAH DONACHIE: There are 13 letters in your name. Those 13 letters total to 61. There are 6 vowels and 7 consonants in your name.

What your first name means: Muslim Female Variant of Sara: Pure. Happy.
Hebrew Female Princess. In the Bible, Sarah was the wife of Abraham and mother of Isaac. Her name was originally Sarai (quarrelsome), but God commanded that her name be changed to Sarah before the birth of her son.
Biblical Female Lady; princess; princess of the multitude

Your number is: 7
The characteristics of #7 are: Analysis, understanding, knowledge, awareness, studious, meditating.

The expression or destiny for #7: Thought, analysis, introspection, and seclusiveness are all characteristics of the expression number 7. The hallmark of the number 7 is a good mind, and especially good at searching out and finding the truth. You are so very capable of analyzing, judging and discriminating, that very little ever escapes your observation and deep understanding. You are the type of person that can really get involved in a search for wisdom or hidden truths, often becoming an authority on whatever it is your are focusing on. This can easily be of a technical or scientific nature, or it may be religious or occult, it matters very little, you pursue knowledge with the same sort of vigor. You can make a very fine teacher, or because of a natural inclination toward the spiritual, you may become deeply emerged in religious affairs or even psychic explorations. You tend to operate on a rather different wavelength, and many of your friends may not really know you very well. The positive aspects of the 7 expression are that you can be a true perfectionist in a very positive sense of the word. You are very logical, and usually employ a quite rational approach to most things you do. You can be so rational at times that you almost seem to lack emotion, and when you are faced with an emotional situation, you may have a bit of a problem coping with it. You have excellent capabilities to study and learn really deep and difficult subjects, and to search for hidden fundamentals. At full maturity you are likely to be a very peaceful and poised individual.

If there is an over supply of the number 7 in your makeup, the negative aspects of the number may be apparent. The chief negative of 7 relates to the limited degree of trust that you may have in people. A tendency to be highly introverted can make you a bit on the self-centered side, certainly very much self-contained . Because of this, you are not very adaptable, and you may tend to be overly critical and intolerant. You really like to work alone, at your own pace and in your own way. You neither show or understand emotions very well.

Your Soul Urge number is: 5
A Soul Urge number of 5 means: The 5 soul urge or motivation would like to follow a life of freedom, excitement, adventure and unexpected happening. The idea of travel and freedom to roam intrigues you. You are very much the adventurer at heart. Not particularly concerned about your future or about getting ahead, you can seem superficial and unmotivated.

In a positive sense, the energies of the number 5 make you very adaptable and versatile. You have a natural resourcefulness and enthusiasm that may mark you as a progressive with a good mind and active imagination. You seem to have a natural inclination to be a pace-setter. You are attracted to the unusual and the fast paced.

You may be overly restless and impatient at times. You may dislike the routine work that you are engaged in, and tend to jump from activity to activity, without ever finishing anything. You may have difficulty with responsibility. You don't want to be tied down to a relationship, and it may be hard to commit to one person.

Your Inner Dream number is: 11
An Inner Dream number of 11 means: You dream of casting the light of illumination; of being the true idealist. You secretly believe there is more to life than we can know or prove, and you would like to be provider of the 'word' from on high.


3. MAR 06, 1991: Your date of conception was on or about 13 June 1990 which was a Wednesday. You were born on a Wednesday under the astrological sign Pisces. Your Life path number is 11.

Your fortune cookie reads: In the end there are three things that last: faith, hope and love; and the greatest of these is love.

Life Path Compatibility: You are most compatible with those with the Life Path numbers 2, 4, 8, 11 & 22.
You should get along well with those with the Life Path numbers 3 & 6.
You may or may not get along well with those with the Life Path number 9.
You are least compatible with those with the Life Path numbers 1, 5 & 7.

The Julian calendar date of your birth is 2448321.5.
The golden number for 1991 is 16.
The epact number for 1991 is 14.
The year 1991 was not a leap year.

Your birthday falls into the Chinese year beginning 2/15/1991 and ending 2/3/1992. You were born in the Chinese year of the Goat.
Your Native American Zodiac sign is Wolf; your plant is Plantain.
You were born in the Egyptian month of Pachons, the first month of the season of Shomu (Harvest).
Your date of birth on the Hebrew calendar is 21 AdarI 5751. Or if you were born after sundown then the date is 22 AdarI 5751.
The Mayan Calendar long count date of your birthday is 12.18.17.15.17 which is 12 baktun 18 katun 17 tun 15 uinal 17 kin
The Hijra (Islamic Calendar) date of your birth is Wednsday, 19 Sha'ban 1411 (1411-8-19).
The date of Easter on your birth year was Sunday, 31 March 1991.
The date of Orthodox Easter on your birth year was Sunday, 7 April 1991.
The date of Ash Wednesday (the first day of Lent) on your birth year was Wednesday 13 February 1991.
The date of Whitsun (Pentecost Sunday) in the year of your birth was Sunday 19 May 1991.
The date of Whisuntide in the year of your birth was Sunday 26 May 1991.
The date of Rosh Hashanah in the year of your birth was Tuesday, 10 September 1991.
The date of Passover in the year of your birth was Sunday, 31 March 1991.
The date of Mardi Gras on your birth year was Tuesday 12 February 1991.

As of 9/27/2008 8:45:58 PM EDT: You are 17 years old.
You are 210 months old. You are 916 weeks old. You are 6,415 days old. You are 153,980 hours old. You are 9,238,845 minutes old. You are 554,330,758 seconds old.

Celebrities who share your birthday:
Eli Marienthal (1986) Shaquille O'Neal (1972) D.L. Hughley (1963)
Tom Arnold (1959) David Gilmour (1946) Rob Reiner (1945)
Kiri Te Kanawa (1944) Willie Stargell (1941) Marion Barry (1936)
Lorin Maazel (1930) Alan Greenspan (1926) Ed McMahon (1923)
Lou Costello (1906) Elizabeth Barrett Browning (1806) Michelangelo Buonarroti (1475)

Top songs of 1991
I Do It for You by Bryan Adams I Wanna Sex You Up by Color Me Badd
Gonna Make You Sweat by C & C Music Factory Rush, Rush by Paula Abdul
One More Try by Timmy T. Unbelievable by EMF
More Than Words by Extreme I Like the Way by Hi-Five
The First Time by Surface Baby Baby by Amy Grant

Your age is the equivalent of a dog that is 2.51076320939335 years old. (Life's just a big chewy bone for you!)

Your lucky day is Thursday. Your lucky number is 3 & 7. Your ruling planet(s) is Jupiter & Neptune. Your lucky dates are 1st, 10th, 19th, 28th. Your opposition sign is Virgo. Your opposition number(s) is 5. Today is not one of your lucky days!

There are 160 days till your next birthday
on which your cake will have 18 candles. Those 18 candles produce 18 BTUs, or 4,536 calories of heat (that's only 4.5360 food Calories!). You can boil 2.06 US ounces of water with that many candles.

In 1991 there were approximately 4.1 million births in the US.
In 1991 the US population was approximately 248,709,873 people, 70.3 persons per square mile.
In 1991 in the US there were 2,371,000 marriages (9.4%) and 1,187,000 divorces (4.7%)
In 1991 in the US there were approximately 2,148,000 deaths (8.6 per 1000)
In the US a new person is born approximately every 8 seconds.
In the US one person dies approximately every 12 seconds.

In 1991 the population of Australia was approximately 17,387,023.
In 1991 there were approximately 257,247 births in Australia.
In 1991 in Australia there were approximately 113,869 marriages and 45,652 divorces.
In 1991 in Australia there were approximately 119,146 deaths.

Your birthstone is Aquamarine. The Mystical properties of Aquamarine: Aquamarine is often used to experience love and mercy. It is said to help ease depression and grief. Some lists consider these stones to be your birthstone. (Birthstone lists come from Jewelers, Tibet, Ayurvedic Indian medicine, and other sources). Jade, Rock Crystal, Bloodstone

Your birth tree is Weeping Willow, the Melancholy. Beautiful but full of melancholy, attractive, very empathic, loves anything beautiful and tasteful, loves to travel, dreamer, restless, capricious, honest, can be influenced but is not easy to live with, demanding, good intuition, suffers in love but finds sometimes an anchoring partner.

There are 89 days till Christmas 2008!
There are 102 days till Orthodox Christmas!
The moon's phase on the day you were born was waning gibbous.

Posted: Sep 27, 2008



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