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A simple poem about fear I wrote for school. I got a "B" on it. View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 9, 2008 Reads: 61 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
“Fear”
I will know that this sear,
Will always bring back the fear.
My heat is like a sepulcher stabbed by a spear,
In my never ending fear.
I do not want my fear so near,
As it makes my life unclear.
I despise that Heaven isn’t near,
And it seems the Angels don’t hear.
Nothing is left; the end is near,
I feel lost because they aren’t here.
But I think I have a chance to make it clear,
‘Cause its time to step up and face my fears.
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Posted: Mar 10, 2008
Wow! That was amazing. You can really tell that you are wright ing from your own life. What are you afraid of? You should have gotten an A on that!
Posted: Mar 10, 2008
What??? A "b". Damn, I'm going to have to sue your teacher...
Posted: Mar 20, 2008
Why did you get a B? You should have gotten an A. That's an amazing piece. You have a very interesting perspective. I can tell you're oppinionated and that you don't care if someone gets offended. That's awesome
~Kaori
Posted: Apr 17, 2008
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