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Death, My Loyal Companion

Poem By: LeAnne
Thrillers


Long time no see, you guys!!
Wel, this is a poem, supposedly for a challenge, but it didn't turn out as i wanted it. Thought i'd post it up anyway.

Well, the title says it all!! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


Death, My Loyal Companion

 

I hear the silent screams of pain,

Eveywhere I look, I see blood.

I can predict the daysd of darkness,

fnd the endings of innocent lives.

--><--

I am a soulless creature,

I am the devil’s puppet.

Death walks beside me

And runs in my veins.

--><--

Darkness shades me from the light.

Evey corner I turn, shadows reach my vision.

Storms overwhelm the brightest skies

And block Heaven from the clouds.

--><--

I grant the dfeath wishes of others,

fnd bring pain to those who don’t believe.

I am a disease, fear me;

for Death is my loyal companion.


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Comments:

Wow. Very good!

There was an in the poem, but it was still good.

"dfeath" should be "death"

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

yes, i know. Many spelling errors, and thanks for the advice and comment!

BEing a DOCTOR, i can absolutely understand the depth of this poem...YOU know what i am so scared of seeing any one die that I chose MICROBIOLOGy so that i never see any patient directly.....BUT help the physicians with my diagnosis....as well contributing via Lab reports.....I am indeed scared of losing any one....

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

So am i, though i did lost someone to cancer, it took a long time to move on.

and the funny part is I AM NOT SCARED TO DIE MYSELF....

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I'd risk my own life to save another. I was taught that way.
But even if anyone did die, or if either of us does, we'll know where we are.



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