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Fade In: (Nighttime close up shot, San Francisco California, Tuesday, 7:23 pm!)

Close up shot: (The St. Clair residence)

Tyler: "Brenda, open this door immeidiately or i'll break it in your face!"

Brenda: "Come on, kids get your things together we need to leave right away!"

Tyler: "Brenda, open it now you bitch!"

Brenda: "Go to hell, Tyler, leave me and the kids alone!!"

(Tyler keeps pounding the door angrily ordering Brenda to open the door to let him inside the house)

Tyler: "Brenda, open the door now! RIGHT NOW!"

(Tyler then jumps to the sound of approaching police vehicles with sirens screaming and lights flashing to arrive at that residence)

Tyler: "You stupid bitch, you called the cops on me?!"

Margie: "Mommy, i'm scared!"

Brenda: "I know that, but we need to get out of here and fast!"

(just then Brenda's father Daniel St. Clair goes after the abusive husband telling him angrily to leave her and the kids alone!)

Daniel: "Leave her and the kids alone, Tyler!"

Tyler: "Shut up and mind your own business, old man! this is between Brenda, the kids, and me!!"

Daniel: "I'm warning ya you bastard, leave her alone or i'll break your damn neck! you're no son in law of mine!"

(Tyler then did the craziest thing and beat Daniel up in the face one time knocking him to the ground)

Coming This Summer!!!!

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