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Murderer on the loose: Part 2 - Escaped

Short story By: AliWitch2002
Thrillers



Nikki,Janice,Michael, and Jake to try to escape. But will they succeed.


Submitted:Jun 16, 2012    Reads: 13    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


 

Murderer on the loose:
Part 2 - Escaped
 
   By: Alondra Navarro
 
 It was at  Nikki’s house when it started. 
   “Hey, what is this movie called?” Michael Crawford asked his girlfriend Nikki Hew.
  “The House,” Nikki said. 
  “ Hey, I’m going to go make more  popcorn,” Janice said.
    Janice got up and looked in the cabinet and then slipped on red stuff.
   “AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!”
Everyone got up and went to check on Janice.
   “Look at the wall and the floor,” Jake pointed.
There was a dead body there.
On the wall it read:
     We might be In jail
But we still have backup
 
  “Is is starting again?” Michael asked. 
      “No, it can’t. There in jail. But who else would have enemies from the past?” Nikki said.
  Michael and Jake looked at each other.
“I don’t know,” Michael said. Jake nodded.
 “Um, I know. We could finish the movie at my house and first we can call the police,” Janice said.
  Everyone nodded in agreement.
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    “Okay, so our parents are handling the police except Janice’s, ain’t that fair,” Nikki said. 
  “Is it my fault that they had to go on there honeymoon now…………in Hawaii,” Janice responded.
Nikki rolled her eyes. 
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     “There at Janice’s place and there parents are gone.”
     “It’s time,” Adrian and Regina said at the same time.
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  They heard moaning. 
 “NIKKI AND MICHEAL!!!!! What are you guys doing???” Janice said.
   “Making out. Is that on your list that you haven’t done with Jake,” Nikki said.
    “Go in my parents’ room if your going to do “it”,” Janice said. That is what we were about to do. Oh, yeah. We need a condem,” Nikki said.
  “In my mom’s thong drawer. And why do you need a condem?” Janice asked.
   “Because I heard that my ex-boyfriend got both of the gym teachers pregnant,” Nikki said.
  “Wait, isn’t one of them a guy,” Jake said.
  “Yea, he’s gay,” Nikki said.
Janice made a disgusted face
 
 
 
“So….were alone,” Nikki said.
“Yea, I know,” Michael responded.
 Then they got close and met there eyes. And then all they knew, was that they were making out and on the bed undressing.
   25 min. later..
 
 “You are better than I expected you to be,” Jake said. 
“You know what I just realized,” Janice said.
“What,” Jake said.
 “That Nikki and Michael are doing “it” too,” Janice said.
 “Yea, so,” Jake said.
“Nothing,” Janice said.”
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 After that, Nikki and Michael were done, and Janice and Jake were done too. And they were in the living room talking.
   “Hey…you guys look tan. Did you guys do it too. OMG!!! They did,” Nikki said.
   Michael’s jaw dropped.
 “Ok yes we did it. And we are not back together, but it’s complicated. And we were getting close and then we were on my bed making out and undressing,” Jake said.
    “Same with us,” Michael said.
“Here, put the movie on and before you do turn on the news, I’m going to go talk to Janice in the kitchen,” Nikki said.
 
 
 “Hey, what’s up,” Janice asked.
 “They were awful at it,” Nikki said.
 “I know right,” Janice said.
“It was……..was……different,” Nikki said, “when I had done this with my ex-boyfriend, he did it really great and the hands were the most that I loved,” Nikki said.
“I just think that we shouldn’t talk about this or even tell them about it,” Janice said.
Nikki nodded in agreement.
   
“I just heard that the super market was robbed. And that there is another Murderer on the loose,” Jake said.
“I think that we should sleep right here on the floor in the living room. I mean, what if the murderer comes in and does something. Now we can escape and call the police,” Janice said.
   “Great idea,” Nikki said sarcastically.
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 They never watched the movie. They didn’t like it.
  But when it came time to sleep. Nikki and Michael were the ones to do “it” again and Janice and Michael were the ones to talk about.(there relationship)
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  “Do you want to do it again?” Nikki asked Michael.
  “I think we should just make out,” Michael said.
  Nikki said.
 And they started making out.
Meanwhile, Jake and Janice were talking until the whole group got tired of making out and talking and pretty soon fell asleep for a few hours.
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It started beeping. Not the chip in Janice’s head. But the fire alarm.
  Everyone woke up. Nikki started coughing.
  It was smoky in the living room. They got up and put there shoes on. And then they heard foot steps. 
  “Do you hear that?” Janice asked everyone.
Then, Nikki and Michael got pulled but the hair and started screaming and yelling.
   “EVERYONE LISTEN TO US OR JOIN THE DEAD SIDE!”
   Janice didn’t now what to do. She just fainted.
 




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